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Review
First impression [4/5] : In my first impression, I like it! I was more into guessing what's so different from pic 1 and pic 2, however, I then realized that it's just coloring difference, right? So I'll just use the first one.
Font [6.5/10] : I am sorry, but I don't really like the font. I can't really see it since the color is just the same with the background color, and the title is so cramped up slightly messily, and it's hard to read. The credit isn't really seen too, but the font choice for the credit is cute.
Mood [14/15] : I really feel the mood, it's cool!
Coloring [8/10] : Other than looking slightly too monotone, the coloring is good. I don't know what else to say here since it's already good? It's a little bit bit too heavy, though.
Placement [8/10] : The girl on the box is placed a bit weird, but I don't know where else to put here too.
Blending [11/15] : It's a manip graphic and you are trying to make the girl's skirt blend with the river, right? It still looks like a separated picture for me. The 3d-ish shadow boxes make it looks not manipulated into one picture as well. Also, I don't really know why you should cut(?) the face on top vertically on an asymmetrical side??
Resources [18/20] : Nice resources cool resources.
Overall look [13/15]
Total score: 4+6.5+14+8+8+11+13 = 82.5/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ I personally agree that it's not an easy job to make a manip, so props to you! There are still a lot room of improvement, thanks for requesting here! -asdfghjm15
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