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Review
First impression [5/5] : I love it, a lot! <3
Font [8.5/10] : I still think that there are better fonts for the title, but I like it already. and oh my goodness it looks like handwriting on a vapored window after rain
Mood [15/15] : v v v full point at this, because I can really feel it!
Coloring [9.5/10] : The coloring looks really comforting and it also fits the genre really nicely.
Placement [8/10] : The placement of the bottom picture looks slightly off, but it's still nice!
Blending+technique [14/20] : After staring at the poster for a while, I have some things to say here. The girl on the top picture isn't really blended nicely, that the white background still leaves traces on her hair when you put her above the boy. A little bit more of layer mask and a v tiny black brush might work for that! Also, I find the bottom picture blending really awkward, especially the right part. Delete it a little bit more too, maybe?
Resources [5/5] : Nice picture and background choices.
Originality [7.5/10] : There has been a lot of posters like this, right?
Overall look [12/15]
Total score: 5+8.5+9.5+8+14+5+7.5+12= 84.5/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ I really like this graphic and I enjoy looking at it too!! However, there are still a lot room of improvement, esp. in the blending section. Thank you for requesting here, please leave a comment once you've read your review and if you really find this super helpful, upvotes are appreciated! -asdfghjm15
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