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floras
Review
First impression [4/5] : Mmmm, my first impression is pretty nice!
Font [8/10] : The font is fitting, for me. And I feel like it shows the vibe of some aesthetic light HAHAHA but!! I think this needs to be talked about in the font/typography rubric. I'm not really into the grey brush behind your credit, it might look better without the brush!
Mood [11/15] : Maybe...? Not sure. It looks more like a profile edit?
Coloring [8.5/10] : Honestly I like the coloring, just that it's a taaaad biiiit too bright, but it's fine. And it's so vibrant.
Placement [7/10] : I'm not really into the two boxes, somehow. The yellow one collides with the 'police line', so it feels annoying? But I think it's okay, overall.
Blending+technique [15/20] : The grain effect, I'm not really sure why you decided to apply it on the face on the top and bottom. Did you do it to make the face that isn't grained to pop out? If so, maybe a dark texture is better, or perhaps the blur tool. The grain tool makes it seem so not HD and it turns me off. The blending is pretty fine, I think. The 'dare mess with her' can be done better, maybe, with inner shadow/some effects on the text!
Resources [4/5] : Not a lot of resources used, but pretty fine.
Originality [7/10] : I don't know, for me it gives off the 'i need to edit but i'm not inspired sighs okay then i'll just try something i have tried' vibe so I don't really think it's really original.
Overall look [11/15]
Total score: 4+8+11+8.5+7+4+7+11= 75.5/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ You really can try better, of course! There are still a lot room of improvement. Please do leave a comment after you read this to let me know, and if you feel that this review helps you, upvotes are appreciated! Thanks for requesting here! -asdfghjm15
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