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Review
First impression [3.5/5] : It looks pretty okay, but it still has some things that seems a little off. p.s., the link you put in the comment is just the preview photo link and not the actual link, or am I wrong...? It shows full picture only once I deleted the last letter v off.
Font [8.5/10] : The 'angelus' font is so good!! (and it's a so good title) but was that sudden small letter in the 'A gAKSITALGAKSITAL' intended? If not, it feels so off. You might want to add a tad bit spacing in between angelus and the sentence under it, but no big deal.
Mood [14/15] : Does look romance and angst.
Coloring [9/10] : It's not a really ing color but it's really soft, nice, and calming to the eyes, also it suits the title and genre!! I like!
Placement [8/10] : Maybe the thing that bugs me the most is just the quote placement? And I'm sorry that I can't really express a lot, but it feels like the placement is 'just like that'. Do you get me? Like there's nothing really woah and special from the placing?
Blending+technique [14.5/20] : This is the rubric that I feel like I will have to point out several things. The angel and girl (rip i keep on thinking that that's peterpan, is it?) look like they are badly rendered, and also, they look like they are so not HD and stretched. The splatter-ish brush on the left side looks off and slightly dirty too. But the gif is nice!
Resources [3.8/5] : Not really into blurry pictures but the rest is ok.
Originality [8/10] : There are already several graphics like this, but still props to you for the gif.
Overall look [12/15]
Total score: 3.5+8.5+14+9+8+14.5+3.8+8+12= 81.3/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ Thanks for requesting here! And omg wHY DID YOU SPAZZ ON ME I AM A BANANA but thank youuuu <33 do not be nervous too! There are still so many room to improve and I believe you can do! o/ -asdfghjm15
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