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Review
First impression [5/5] : THIS GIVES A NICE IMPRESSION hello taehyung!!! and i really like the coloring!
Font [7.5/10] : hmm... the fonts can be really better? the "white lily" title looks super plain with just being white and the drop shadow (is it drop shadow?) and the quote font is better, but still no huge 'wow' factor!
Mood [14/15] : good mood good mood i like it!!!!
Coloring [10/10] : the coloring is really a big mood! i really love it!
Placement [8.5/10] : i don't really know what to say in the placement rubric. not the best in the flock but i think it's already pretty good!!
Blending+technique [12/20] : hm.. let's see. on the arm of the other guy there's still some black line, right? i think that's left from the rendering process? it's a little bugging ahahaha :"D and also, you pointed it out! the other guy is very grainy huhuu i suggest you to download topaz, it's a photoshop plug-in that can soften pictures like glass! also, on the lower left side, at the white part, i can see your brush there... the white color you're using is perhaps the #ffffff and the background is already affected by the coloring, so your brush sticks out. i know a lot of people won't really see it duh, but in the perspective of a reviewer i feel like i need to point it out!
Resources [3.5/5] : the ripped paper resources isn't really the best, it still looks unnatural. but otherwise the rest looks good!
Originality [8/10] : there are already several graphics like this, but it's still not easy!
Overall look [13/15]
Total score: 5+7.5+14+10+8.5+12+3.5+8+13= 81.5/100
Personal comment: it's a good one!! i feel like you're doing it happily HAHAH and if your experience is raelly that short... this is so good for someone with that short experience wow. i hope we all can become better, thank you for requesting here!!
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