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Review
First impression [4/5] : so... since this is my first time doing reviews after a really long time, i am pretty excited to start!
Font [8.5/10] : hmm... i think the font is pretty cool, the horror mood and stuff? can be better though, you can be a lot more creative with the styling!
Mood [13/15] : damn sis it's creepy! but a little bit confusing. play with us play with who? the kids? the ghosts? the kids look like ghosts too
Coloring [6/10] : a little bit flat and a little bit too dark on some sides, which makes it hard for me to see a lot of sides. that might be your intention and it might be just *slightly* too dark in your gadget, but what's seen on your laptop might be different if seen in different gadgets! i often edit dark things that look perfectly nice on my laptop, but once i move it to my phone, it gets super dark and meh. so, i suggest you to check the accessibility in other gadgets too! if i see the edit in my phone, i might only be able to see the white ghosts and the typography, the rest is just sooo dark so.
Placement [7/10] : i'm not really into the placement, and the text can get a lot better.
Blending [12/15] : it felt a little bit like you just had one good background and you threw a lot of things on top of it
Resources [15/20] : just... lackluster resources, the basic ones? nothing made my mind go "HEY DAMN I WANT THAT PNG" or something... and uh do white ghosts in the background actually really have eyes
Overall look [11/15]
Total score: 4+8.5+13+6+7+12+11=76.5/100
Personal comment: HI HELLO of course i remember novumel!! thank you for being my first review in this shop after YEARS, i hope it satisfies you! also, please don't hesitate to ask for more reviews if you feel like having those. i hope we all can get better, good luck for the future! -asdfghjm15
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