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His Beautiful Black Pearl
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Author's Note:

AND THAT'S A WRAP YOU GUYS!


Thank you so much to everyone who has read this fic and stayed with me in my journey of entering the world of fanfic writing! I've learned valuable things like not to update every single day but don't wait three weeks either xD
Now for reader input because I really would like to know how I can improve my writing skills/style:


1. Who was your favorite OC?


2. Who's your Exo bias? (Just for funzies, mine's Kai, obviously! But my Sehunnie feels are strong...)


3. Did I do better writing in first or third person? (Or was I okay in both?)


4. Are there any plot holes? If so please tell me so that way I can resolve them somehow in the fic.


5. Was the pace okay? (like...did everything happen too fast or too slow?)


6. How did I do on my villian(s)?


7. Were my OC's dynamic enough?


You don't have to answer the questions, it's entirely optional. Also I made a playlist of the songs since I know that YouTube music doesn't work on iPads and other devices to play in the background. I'm not sure how to fix it to where you don't need YouTube open, but I'll figure it out eventually...anyway.


PLAYLIST:


1. Chapter 7: Black Pearl by Exo-K


2. Chapter 9: Elements by Lindsey Stirling


3. Chapter 14: All Of Me by John Legand

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AlexNightingale #1
Chapter 41: This was amazingly adorable! I loved Sage's character and how she was from Texas. A lot of people don't even think to use Texas.
... but for anyone who doesn't know those, not everyone from Texas has a thick accent. Just saying! :P
YomnaExoticGirl #2
Chapter 40: amazing story ever ever <333 woaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)))) author-nim it's wonderful ..
about the fist oh god how can be this man so horrible and so cruel :((( i glad Aisha forgave him and her stepmother even though they don't deserve it T_T
anyway, thanks author-nim for this beautiful story and your hard working ;)) good job *thumbs up* ♥♥
xoxosenshine #3
Chapter 41: Ohhh the fist is so cruel ! I dont like the fist . But anyway its so fluffy . I like this . Good jobbb
rudelysweetk21 #4
Chapter 37: Oh what happened to aisha food poisoning? ? And haha can't believe luhan just spilled out things like that without thinking..oh deer and the chen troll not helping but missed mr kai today:)
rudelysweetk21 #5
Chapter 36: Haaaaa finally couple are back :) feels good reading.
Sonalen #6
Awww I love this story so much <3
rudelysweetk21 #7
Chapter 35: Haha I guess jongin's gonna have to suffer for a while..but yeah hiding something just leds to misunderstanding but then that's how one learn from their mistake :)
rudelysweetk21 #8
Chapter 34: Hooo T_T I didn't see this coming oh god so much happened in this chap..don't know what should I say . haha its sad but m excited to read next chap actually. .so aisha and jongin are over since aisha asked for her key!! T_T but yeah m still shocked about ladies code ..it just gave me bad chills.. It's more scary maybe because it's related to kpop..
rudelysweetk21 #9
Chapter 33: So what about exo? If jewelz is trying for yg But glad with some kaixaisha time:) now any luhanxsaga time :) and another couple is born taoxheeyoung..well yge is good in treating their artists no one can disagree to that :) but I would like to think other idols are somewhat happy where they are :D haha just my thoughts
rudelysweetk21 #10
Chapter 32: Haaa sage..I tend to run away from problems too which is bad but trying my best to control but not this bad as sage and I guess I can't go out of country. .haha but yeah sage just believe fist like that..well kind of disappointed with her..since she was always strong and someone who will talk her way out of it..but harrr was holding my breath until and end of chap..so she's not leaving right? But yeah big ?? How are they gonna leave now.
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