Chapter 20: Hey~ Do you remember me? I'm the write who wrote 'Am I Hurting?', the story you review in Batch 3. I just want some help. A small one. In the review, you said my characterization for Hyukjae was unrealistic. I've edited the chapter for that scene (Chapter 2) and I want to know is it better than before. Is it enough hesitations from his character or do you think it is still unrealistic. I know this is out of the blue, but I don't know who better than you to assess me. If you are not to busy, of course. If you have lots to do, than it is really fine :)
Poster Link (if any): http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd205/teenace07/er.png
Type (One shot or Chaptered): One shot
Status (Complete or Ongoing): Complete
Characters: Hyuna, Eunjung, EXO
Genre: Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Rated (if yes, please specify e.g. character death, self-harm, ual content): Rated M for alleged
Summary: Only that day (2013, September) did I learnt the pungent smell blood, varieties of human flesh, and the morbid of death; it was the turning point in my life, also the beginning of everything – when the bus we rode skidded into a ravine. When I was on the verge of surrendering to the tragic fate, she reached for my hand and told me, "We'll survive this together."
Forty-four people were killed in the country's deadliest road accident; There were only six survivors and I was one of them.
Short synopsis: A heart-whole friendship developed between two strangers (Song Hyuna, Cha Eunjung) that met and survive in a tragic accident. In no time at all, they were inseparable, but when Song Hyuna found herself enamoured with Eunjung's former boyfriend (Kai), her best friend went missing and it got to the point where she dread going to bed.
Message to readers: Greetings earthlings, first and foremost thank you for reading this. If you're interested with my story, please kindly check it out and leave some comments while you're at it. I'll be anticipating you.
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