Jongdae-centric Soul Tears

AU drabble dump

Drabble 31: Soul tears, Jongdae-centric

Jongdae trudged forward, his shoulders sloped with fatigue and resignation. The heavy weight of his backpack weighed down on his shoulders, and he didn’t raise his head to look up as people passed by him on the road.

At last, he reached the shadows at the edge of town, and he raised his eyes to the sky. The sun was setting in the distance, splashing the sky with purples, pinks, oranges and the faintest twinkles of the first stars.

Jongdae lowered his head, a small smile now playing at the corner of his lips. He continued to walk forward, his eyes glued to the ground as he followed the past into the shadows of the night at his feet. As he walked farther and farther, the lights of the city faded behind him, and the stars and the moon guided him over the grassy plains.

Jongdae fell to his knees and threw his head back. His backpack fell from his shoulders as he stared up at the sky. Tears filled his eyes. It was all for nothing—it had all fallen apart at his feet. He could never hope to reach his dreams, they would all shatter and vanish, like the soft light of the stars shining above.

At last, after kneeling for who knows how long, Jongdae slowly got back to his feet. He settled the weight of his backpack squarely over his shoulders and began to walk back towards the city as the first rays of dawn broke over the horizon behind him.

a/n: Written while listening to Kyungsoo's "Cart" OST. This was a very short piece. Maybe I'll take this series off hiatus, I don't know...inspiration seems to come to me quite frequently this week :) I love you guys! Comments are highly appreciated.

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ephemeral24
2427 streak #1
Chapter 45: was this ever turned into a full on fic? the backstory and just the plot from here is already very interesting... i love it! would've loved if it was longer...

and as i reach the end, thank you for all the beautiful drabbles! they were all so lovely to read :)
ephemeral24
2427 streak #2
Chapter 36: i was intending to finish all the drabbles i was interested in before commenting but this was adorable imo... pups getting used to transforming to their human forms with their guardians fawning over them? at the same time prospecting, idk a future with all of them together??? couldn't resist!
RyuWatanabe #3
Chapter 35: It should be secreet meeting suhan...lol..just joking...still love this...
RyuWatanabe #4
And not to mention your writing is beautiful. ( I think I have mentiooned it so many times and I guess you have heard it a lot...lol) thank you for suhan...I love both masked and uptown downtown
RyuWatanabe #5
Chapter 46: Suhan and more suhan...why the only now I found them hidden in here...lol
RyuWatanabe #6
Chapter 4: I just wanna tell wow...I dunno whether it conclude everything or not...lol
aarushic_18 #7
Chapter 45: PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS A FULL LENGTH FIC
inky-starlight
#8
Chapter 46: I reaaaaaally like this au!
ohplumbaby
#9
Chapter 46: I'm going to say this so I wont regret it later
"I HAD HOPED/WISHED/PRAYED IT WOULD END WITH SUHAN" after I read pt.1 ;;
Ok, there I said it /crying ugly fat crocodile tears/

I search for the 1st part when I see the title contains 'pt.2' bc i guess there must be pt.1 if there is pt.2, so i go there before i open this and I already fall in love with pt.1 with all the angst ;; and I anticipate the next part will be something lovely like probably suhan make up or smt, but....../sobs/
Well, this is lovely in angsty way(?? Umm....)

I just.... I love this, I love suhan, I .... What should I do ;;
I love you, thank you <3
merahmaroon
#10
Chapter 45: please make it into a full fic autor-nim.........TT
i'm begging you
i'm craving for more suho and kris, krisho fells.....