The Illusion of Cinderella

Description

Yesung - Fashion and Design major, unexperienced in romance, bases off clothes for first impressions, wealthy. Is devoted to family. Is talented in all of the arts, but decides to focus on design.

Angie - Fashion major, easily suspicious, likes simple but unique. Has had bad experience with guys. Creativity is her talent, and she thinks it's effortless. Appreciates all of the arts.

 (Let's pretend they're all American students and therefore speak perfect English...not to mention also have American culture stuff in there. You'll see later on.)

He's convinced she's Cinderella, so how does he convince her he's not kidding?

Foreword

"I've had enough of you." Words dropped from my lips like ice as I faced him. The warmth between us had now chilled to ice. I had a feeling it would soon become fire.

"Come on, baby, it's only one mistake-"

"One mistake? ONE MISTAKE? How many times do I have to remind you of your previous mistakes? Get out."

"What?"

"Get out." I pointed a non-trembling finger. "Out."

"You'll be sorry," his lips hissed. His arm was raised. "Imma hit you b-"

I grabbed his arm. "Think again," I said in a steady voice. "You've already hit me too many times." I shoved him in the direction of the door as his eyes flew open in shock.

"You-" he snarled as he got up.

I spread my legs out, bracing for impact as I crossed my arms. Instead he shook his head and scrambled out of the door.

I quickly went to lock the door and collapsed on it with a sigh of relief. As I lifted my arm to check the time, I flinched. Bruises from yesterday appeared as my sleeve rolled down. I rolled down my sleeve with a sigh, and got up. Today, I thought, is the day I will start to heal.

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leejinkioppa
#1
Chapter 22: Ohmygod. Oh if I had a tablet or something I would make you a nice poster, the reason I won't right now is because I love this story and it doesn't deserve a crappy ms paint poster :p
Moony_Kat
#2
Chapter 25: Too bad of the end...
party-party #3
great job!!
great story!!
leejinkioppa
#4
I finally got to read this story. So it was like AMAZING. I LOVED IT SO MUCH. And yeah im going with the long distance relationship thing in my head :D
kitty1025 #5
Love your story I read it in one shot. Like the ending really realistic. And thanks to you scavenger hunt I actually watched the A-cha video to count lol
suju4ever15
#6
gahhh unni~ i finished reading this fanfic in a day XD keke.<br />
j have no life XD
HystericallyCursed
#7
I wish my life was a story D: <br />
Last time I was asked to write about it I could only think of writing about my daily 'adventures' to the mailbox .__.'
ssweetdreamer101 #8
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the first idea just so accent yesung's personality....it'd also awesome if you have him go off in random crazy tangents in between chapters as well
cynder8 #9
i liked the ending for this...and i'm going to go with they ended up together and have a long distance relationship!! or at least a super awesome friendship!! lol! i dont wanna believe after all that they don't keep in touch at all. ;)<br />
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don't normally read suju/oc, but this sounded interesting and it ended better than i thought. i usually end up hating the oc characters in a lot of stories, cause they are too fake or perfect, cause "real ppl" are not like that, but Angie was just like one of us.<br />
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ur author notes at the end of the chapters were great too. all the spazzing. haha!!