Wonderland

Writing Compilation

Hop down the rabbit hole, my dear 
— and into lunacy we'll go.

No need to worry what lies for tomorrow; nor make haste for today. 

What?

What about him, you ask?
Oh don't mind him, really, Peter White's always in a hurry.

Hello, Alice.
The Hatter's holding another party today, 
will you make some time?

It's alright to lose yourself, darling:
Let loose and unwind. 
Enjoy your stay here, 
'cause it isn't any crime.

Sorry, what did you say?
You have to leave?
But you've only just got here!

The old caterpillar enjoys your company so, and I haven't seen Chesire grin so wide in ages.

What could you possibly want up there?

It's better here, much betterthan up where you used to bustle.

There's no point in returning, truly.

With finality, the Ace of Spades whispers into your ear,  

"Or, no way rather, once you're down here."

So, hop down the rabbit hole, my dear 
— and into fantasy we'll go.

 

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 28: Oooo I like this one. The last line gives me goosebumps. I like how you built up the tension to that point.
SkyeButterfly
#2
Chapter 27: “You weren't by my side anymore, and would never be.” I felt that… this was a very well written emotional piece
SkyeButterfly
#3
Chapter 27: “The mere presence of each other was taboo.” 😭 wow
SkyeButterfly
#4
Chapter 26: When i get a really good idea but the more i think about, the worse the idea actually gets
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 26: lol this is relatable
SkyeButterfly
#6
Chapter 25: At first, I thought someone died, but then I kept reading…
SkyeButterfly
#7
Chapter 25: Wow I’m not sure what to make of this because the writing is abstract in nature, but the sadness is very palpable
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 24: This reminds me of a quote where it’s like “a monster is not a monster if you love it” (I’m getting it wrong lol but it was something along those lines)
SkyeButterfly
#9
Chapter 24: Wow 😯 beautifully written!!
SkyeButterfly
#10
Chapter 23: this was very nice btw!