Don't Go

Writing Compilation

My eyes refuse
to tear away, 
from the 
brokenness 
in you. 

Perhaps it's because I once knew that feeling awfully well, too.

Don't cower away; don't hide. I promise I won't hurt you.

There's nothing
stopping you now, 
you beautiful, 
beautiful creature — 
you just don't notice. 

I'll pick up all 
the shattered fragments 
of your heart
he carelessly 
discarded.

I'll piece you back
one by one,
till you're as good as new;
till you're a freshly cut diamond,
and everyone is pining for you.

I can't stand seeing such a precious creature wounded.

I won't go 
anywhere, 
love. 

So please, 
please
don't go.

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 28: Oooo I like this one. The last line gives me goosebumps. I like how you built up the tension to that point.
SkyeButterfly
#2
Chapter 27: “You weren't by my side anymore, and would never be.” I felt that… this was a very well written emotional piece
SkyeButterfly
#3
Chapter 27: “The mere presence of each other was taboo.” 😭 wow
SkyeButterfly
#4
Chapter 26: When i get a really good idea but the more i think about, the worse the idea actually gets
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 26: lol this is relatable
SkyeButterfly
#6
Chapter 25: At first, I thought someone died, but then I kept reading…
SkyeButterfly
#7
Chapter 25: Wow I’m not sure what to make of this because the writing is abstract in nature, but the sadness is very palpable
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 24: This reminds me of a quote where it’s like “a monster is not a monster if you love it” (I’m getting it wrong lol but it was something along those lines)
SkyeButterfly
#9
Chapter 24: Wow 😯 beautifully written!!
SkyeButterfly
#10
Chapter 23: this was very nice btw!