Intruder

Horrifyingly SHINee: A Collection

It was late when Jinki collapsed into bed, turning on the television to watch the 11 o’clock news. He’d missed seeing the news at night for a while and was happy to get the chance to lay comfortably and watch.

The news reporter was reading breaking news report, causing Jinki to sit up and pay more attention.

“Murderer on the loose… believed to be armed and dangerous hiding in the vicinity.” Everyone was being warned to remain alert and lock all doors and windows before going to sleep.

Jinki shuddered, turning the television off quickly. He snuggled under his blankets and was almost asleep when a noise from downstairs startled him.

At first he passed it off as his brain playing tricks, but when the noise came again, he could no longer pretend it was anything other than what it was.

Knowing that he was alone, Jinki was shaken as the sound of footfalls met his ears.

There was an intruder in his house.

Terrified, he climbed out of bed quickly and quietly, tip toeing his way to the open window. He had to move quickly, the footsteps getting closer and closer and sounding like more than one pair.

Hoping that he was being quiet enough to get away without being caught, Jinki slipped out the window shaking with fear.

Lowering himself down the drainpipe and dropping onto the yard, he let out a sigh of relief when he saw the bedroom lights click on.

Someone screamed from above him, a horrible sound that made Jinki startle before he took off running. He could only hope they weren’t going to come after him. Chills ran down his spine as he thought of what could happen if they caught him.

Pushing through the darkness, he ran until he reached a street a few blocks over.

Clutching his knife tightly in his hand, Jinki smiled before heading towards another house.'

 

 

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Just a small one for the day after Halloween!

I'm away for the weekend, but I'll try and make sure to have tomorrow's update posted on time... :D

Let me know what you think!!

Loves Kat

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_Baozi_Minseok_
#1
Chapter 13: I like theory b, but why the frick did she randomly have a knife? I understand the smile part, but a knife? Biatch you tryna kill my babies without even realizing it? don't even -_- but I still think it would be funny if she got so scared and everyone worried and in the end it was just her XD
Syireen
#2
You've done a good job on scaring me. Well Done. -thumbs up-
p/s: will wait for your next update. ^_^
Syirrea #3
Your story awesome. The way you wrote it was really good. You almost got me scared. Can't wait for the next chapter.
P/S: Thank you for writing such a great horror stories.
Love you Author-nim. ♥
Leos_Lioness
#4
This was awesome! Scared the hell out of me but these were good! Jonghyun must be your bias huh?! ;-) He's in a lot of stories, My Husband is Minho! LOL The only ones that really made me question if they were real or not was "The Red Room, I Know & Tomino's Hell" I almost peed my pants LOL. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read your updated stories. I have 2 ideas: Spiders and The Elevator Game. Hwaiting Author-Nim <3
KenzieKat
#5
Chapter 2: oh. Oh thanks. I should've known not to read this at night, but I didn't think I would get this scared. I guess I'm easy to get scared or somethin' but the hair on the back of my neck is standin' up, and I feel like shuddering. Maybe it's because the thought of someone in my window always made me scared, too. I would never look at night, even when I was a kid. :(
TypicalAuthornim
#6
Chapter 32: Its good but I really dont feel the satisfaction of reading a horror..... in the end there must be at least one twist or a gruesome death so that it is a horror story.... anyways nice update... why dont you try one with a clown?? As to me, I love clowns in the day but that srsly doesnt apply to me for night.... clowns are wicked at night! Imagine when at midnight, you hear a knock and open to see a plastic clown grinning widely at you!! Will you take it in? But your pic did make me jump in horror!! Are you striving to give me a cardiac arrest at this young age? ?
EmpressMazuru
#7
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter
EmpressMazuru
#8
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter
EmpressMazuru
#9
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter