Hell-evator

Horrifyingly SHINee: A Collection

It wasn’t the first time that Taemin had walked the hallways of his dorm after midnight and he didn’t figure that it would be the last.

The corridor he was currently walking, that of the 5th floor, seemed to be quieter than usual. Although since it was nearing 3 am it wasn’t really a surprise that the normally bustling hall seemed out of sorts.

The lights in front of the elevator alcove flickered as he walked closer, the sound of the electricity pulsating through the dim bulbs sounding eerie in the late hour. A shiver went down his spine as he pressed the call button.

Heavy silver doors shook as the elevator came to a shudder stop and opened up waiting for Taemin to step inside.

Heart racing for some unknown reason, Taemin stepped inside and pushed the button for his floor. The elevator doors slid slowly closed as Taemin leaned back against the back wall of the small moving box.

Closing his eyes to rub the sleep out of them, he didn’t see the lights flickering in the 5th floor hallway go dark.

Dropping his bag to the floor, Taemin grumbled to himself about the late hour and the stupidity of his study group classmates. Why had it taken them so long to grasp some simple calculous equations that he’d mastered at the start of term?

Suddenly, feeling much too soon, the elevator shuddered to a stop. Opening his eyes, Taemin stared at the glowing numbers realizing, although half asleep, that he was only at the 9th floor.

The doors opened and after what seemed like an eternity, closed again with a low thunk. Gears grinding, the elevator started to move again.

Weirded out, but not really thinking much of it, Taemin closed his eyes again. They burned from being awake for so many hours.

The silence was slightly eerie as only the sounds of the mechanical gears filled the night, but Taemin thought nothing of it having done this trip so many times in the past.

Until the elevator shook again as it stopped on yet another floor not his own.

“What the ?” He swore, glaring at the glowing number 14. “Stupid ancient elevators and their ty-ness.”

Once again shuddering, the doors began to close only to re-open within seconds of closing.

Frustrated, Taemin slammed his middle finger onto the door close button scowling as it lit up and the doors slid shut.

With the largest shudder and jerk yet, the elevator started to move upwards very slowly. Now Taemin watched as the light on the number pad shifted from 14 to 15, noticing a red warning light that flashed just before a loud beep filled the tiny, nearly empty box.

The beep became a shrill ringing as the maximum weight alarm went off causing Taemin to jump in surprise. His heart racing he hurried to pick up his backpack and cradle it tightly in his arms.

As soon as the red light flashed to his floor and the doors started to open, Taemin bolted from the steel box. The piercing alarm stopped the second his feet stepped onto the coffee stained carpet of floor 19.

Shadows from the hallway lights danced against the reflective walls as the young man glanced back at the empty elevator and as the doors slid closed behind him, he could have swore that he heard something cackle evily before something much closer and softer whispered “good night.”

Eyes wide as the lights went out, he was plunged into complete blackness, Taemin ran for his room praying that this night his roommate had left the door unlocked.

He had.

Slamming the door shut and sliding the deadbolt into place, Taemin rammed his back into the door and slid down to wrap his arms around his knees on the floor.

That was how his roommate found him the next morning, eyes wide and bloodshot from not sleeping, red half-moons carved into the flesh of his arms, the memory of the elevator to hell forever burned into his memories.

 

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_Baozi_Minseok_
#1
Chapter 13: I like theory b, but why the frick did she randomly have a knife? I understand the smile part, but a knife? Biatch you tryna kill my babies without even realizing it? don't even -_- but I still think it would be funny if she got so scared and everyone worried and in the end it was just her XD
Syireen
#2
You've done a good job on scaring me. Well Done. -thumbs up-
p/s: will wait for your next update. ^_^
Syirrea #3
Your story awesome. The way you wrote it was really good. You almost got me scared. Can't wait for the next chapter.
P/S: Thank you for writing such a great horror stories.
Love you Author-nim. ♥
Leos_Lioness
#4
This was awesome! Scared the hell out of me but these were good! Jonghyun must be your bias huh?! ;-) He's in a lot of stories, My Husband is Minho! LOL The only ones that really made me question if they were real or not was "The Red Room, I Know & Tomino's Hell" I almost peed my pants LOL. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read your updated stories. I have 2 ideas: Spiders and The Elevator Game. Hwaiting Author-Nim <3
KenzieKat
#5
Chapter 2: oh. Oh thanks. I should've known not to read this at night, but I didn't think I would get this scared. I guess I'm easy to get scared or somethin' but the hair on the back of my neck is standin' up, and I feel like shuddering. Maybe it's because the thought of someone in my window always made me scared, too. I would never look at night, even when I was a kid. :(
TypicalAuthornim
#6
Chapter 32: Its good but I really dont feel the satisfaction of reading a horror..... in the end there must be at least one twist or a gruesome death so that it is a horror story.... anyways nice update... why dont you try one with a clown?? As to me, I love clowns in the day but that srsly doesnt apply to me for night.... clowns are wicked at night! Imagine when at midnight, you hear a knock and open to see a plastic clown grinning widely at you!! Will you take it in? But your pic did make me jump in horror!! Are you striving to give me a cardiac arrest at this young age? ?
EmpressMazuru
#7
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter
EmpressMazuru
#8
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter
EmpressMazuru
#9
Chapter 5: I love your horror shots! You should do the one about the midget clown and the babysitter