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Enough ..! I'm already suffering

Hello there again :D I think I wrote a touching  chapter while randomly listening to some sad songs mostly EXO- Baby don't cry 3

I hope you guys will like it <3 Comments are LOVED as usual so plz make my day with you lovely comments :D

 

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Lay POV

She was pissing me of; who the hell she thinks herself to interfere between us; I told her to move but she just insisted to irritate me!

 I was really angry; I pushed her away hard; she lost her balance and fell backward and her head hit the table edge really hard!

I was shocked; My heart stopped beating and everything went silent; Her teary eyes didn’t leave mine till she fully closed them . .  

I was pushed aside by Kris who was shouting for the boys to call the ambulance quickly

‘What’s wrong with me? – How? – I …I?  -- She's bleeding’ I thought while my eyes fixed on her lifeless body; I was half conscious -- Everything was crazy Luhan, Sehun, Baekhyun and chen by her side Suho calling manager hyung while chanyeol calling the ambulance trembling …

 

 

 

Kris POV

He pushed her really hard; I was really scared when I saw her head bleeding; it's dangerous enough to kill this innocent girl;  I push him aside running to where she was lying lifelessly!

" YAH!____, wake up huh?! --- Stay awake ____ah~!!!!!” I said while waving in front of her eyes but her eyes never left Lay’s and her eyes where getting heavily when she slowly closed them fully; I totally panicked

“No No -- Stay awake! ! YAH!!!!!! " I kept on trying to talk to her but she didn’t move at all …. I made sure not to move her since the place she’s hit at is really sensitive

"Call the ambulance, QUICKLY!!!!!!” I start panicking; She's not answering; she looked totally lifeless now

“I-I did” Chanyeol said worried with trembling voice

" ____, please wake up …  " I said tears threatening to escape my eyes

 

Luhan POV

‘How could he  ... to this innocent girl’ I thought not fully functioning at the moment

I was standing in my place eyes on ____ bleeding; my heart was aching so bad that tears came out silently

 I saw Sehun standing far away from her while blankly staring at her with an emotionless expression; My heart started aching; recently they got really close to each other’s and I know how he’s feeling right now .. He never show his emotions and it’s not really good

Ambulance and manager hyung arrived; they took her quickly and left with a crazy speed! I looked at where she was and I saw her blood stains on the table and also some stains on the floor

 Another tear escaped my eye; I approached Sehun with my worried expression and softly held his hand

“She’s – She’s going to be – fine” I said and my voice cracked as tears were chocking me; He didn’t say anything and kept his eyes where she was seconds ago

At the hospital

Lay POV

They were running with her laying lifelessly on the wheel-bed; I couldn't continue with them my legs were shaking -- I was so scared; my legs betrayed me at the entrance of the hospital and I just sat there shivering  . .  

 

Chanyeol POV

We ran along with Manager hyung when they took her to the ambulance; we reached the hospital and rushed inside along with the doctors

I saw Lay sitting helplessly at the entrance of the hospital; is he crying? Lay crying? I'm really surprised!  But why? Lay never cries! Even if he’s going through the hardest time he’ll never let a tear slide down in front of anyone!

‘Could it be that *eyes widen* he loves her?’  I thought surprised; I went back to where the others where in front the emergency room

"She’s still in there?” I asked them, Kris nodded worriedly

"Hyung …..  S-she is going to be fine …. Right? “Tao said in the verge of crying

"Shhh Tao, she's going to be alright ….  “I said hugging him trying to comfort him

 

Lay POV

I pulled myself up and went to where they were; I looked at the sign and it was still red; I stepped forward slowly when they saw me . .

"It's – It’s your entire fault!" Luhan said emotionlessly while holding on the emotionless and pale Sehun

"YAH! YOU!  ………” Kris suddenly snapped out and grabbed on my collar while his lips trembling

“I-If something happened to h-her ….. Y-you'll regret... “ kris said tears coming out of his eyes; He looked so weak at the moment .. They all were . .

“Hyung – stop it he didn’t mean to push her” Luhan came and pulled him away from me and held me trembling hand as he softened a bit

“Don’t worry lay” He said and I looked down when the light turned green the doctor stepped out looking unpleasant

"What happened Doctor? " Manager hyung said concerned

"I'm sorry  -- she slipped suddenly in a coma and we can’t treat her now to avoid any complications that might happen during the operation which could result in a huge blood loss and lead to death -- We have to wait till she wakes up so we can treat her" Doctor said apologetically  and left

"She's in danger because of me; she might ……. Die... Because of me  ..." I thought as the doctor hit me hard; I couldn't breathe at the moment; I turned away heavily, half concious leaving the hospital

 

Kris POV

The doctor words made me shiver; I looked at Lay who turned away heavily and leaving the place; I felt so bad for him, I just can’t treat him harshly, Lay is so fragile and sensitive; I always take special care of him; Me and Luhan treated him harshly while we are the ones who never let anyone bother him and we are overprotective toward him

 I regret acting this way but I couldn’t control myself; I'm sure he's blaming himself; but he should know his fault at least

 I told the doctor if we can see her and he said we can but only one by one without noise so I was the first to enter

 

___ POV

I wanted to open my eyes but I couldn't, I can her people screaming and talking; But I couldn't move

 Next thing I know I was in a quiet place and comfortable bed; I can breathe probably now; and I was in less pain; I felt someone holding my hand ……  It was so warm

 

" ____ah … It's me .. Kris” I heard his soft and gentle voice and then he paused

“Can you hear me? -- hmmm?” He said again softly humming waiting for me to reply while sniffing as I could hear his shaky voice now

“Wake up -- I missed your voice; I want you to annoy me --  Come on wake up -- I didn't hear you calling me Oppa yet” He said softly and sniffed again

“____-ah , I'll never fight with anyone again ..  I promise; just open your eyes ….." He said and paused again then I felt warm on my forehead as he planted a soft peak

I wanted to open my eyes … I wanted to tell him that I can hear him, I wanted to call him Oppa then I heard sobs beside me!

" ____, it's Baekhyun …… *sobs*  the big baby you love ….. You can hear me right? Come on Let’s go home ….. Eeh??” I heard Baekhyun voice while crying and my heart started to ache

“  ____ ah~  I'll piggyback you so you'll never be tired, why are you not answering me? I miss you -- really" I heard him stressing the last word as he was trying to suffocate his cries

"Oppa Don't cry, it hurts me" I thought wishing I could just open my eyes and talk to them

 

Silence again?

" ____ ah, it's Luhan oppa, it's the bad Oppa who said will protect you but he didn't .. The bad Oppa who let his feelings blinding him … I’m sorry for caring less about you the previous months, you don’t know how I feel about you? Do you?”  I heard Luhan Oppa’s voice as he was apologizing for his sudden change in attitude towards me recently

 “Wake up I promise I'm not going to let anyone hurt you again, I promise ___ ah! *sobs*" I felt warm again on my forehead and silence filled the place; I was really fighting to wake up,  I'll never give up,  I hate hearing them crying

Luhan POV

“H-Hyung .. can I – Can I go in?” I heard Sehun’s voice as soon as I stepped out of the room teary I looked up at him who is showing no emotions till now; I caressed his hand and nodded slowly; I looked at his back when he tried hard to pull himself up and enter her room

“Can you just cry Sehun-ah?” I thought looking at him sadly as I knew he was chocking his tears right now; and I just hoped he would say anything or just let it all out

 

_____ POV

"N-noona  ….”  I suddenly heard Sehun’s shaky voice

“It’s S-Sehun “ I heard as his voice cracked he then went silent for a moment  

“ I know you can hear me –“ He said with shaky voice and held me hand in his both warm hands

 “I-I know you can hear me so open your eyes …..”

 “I have home works and I need help ……. Get up Noona ….” He said and went silent but I can clearly hear his sobs now

“You can't just leave us like this? ….. We really love you and we need you, you do too right?  Now come on its late lets go home together ………” He said pulling my hand gently

“Noona ..”

“Yah! Open your eyes!!!!!!” He suddenly snapped

 “YAH!!!!!!!!”  He started shouting and shaking me

 I felt pain shooting in my whole body and I heard the peep peep peep peep peep sound ; Then all I remember is that I heard mixed voices then the room was cold and silent again

 "He is not here  ...  Lay is not here for me!" I thought sadly

Kris POV

I heard Sehun shouting; I went inside quickly; I saw him crying hard while shaking ____ asking her to wake up

"YAH! SEHUN!!  Are you crazy, come here!!!!!! “I said dragging him outside; Doctors came running to the room to make sure she was fine ……

"NO! hyung …….  Please ……. No! I just want to wake her up hyung ..” He said beaking my heart, it’s my first time seeing him like this

“ I just wanted her to open her eyes … but she didn't hyung” tears formed in my eyes again and I looked up not to let a single tear slide down while still holding into him; He looked so weak;  I hugged him tight

"Shhh Sehunie, Don't cry"

Manager hyung came and told me to take the guys home since the doctors won’t allow you to go inside now and because the guys were not really feeling well specially Sehun

We went home but everyone couldn't sleep; I went and cleaned the house and I saw ___ blood stains again that made my heart hurt; I cleaned the place I looked at the wall and the clock showed that it was 2:00 am …. Lay didn’t show up yet! I called him but his phone was off!

 

Lay POV

I stopped walking; I was in front of the beach right now; I looked at the dark sky tears falling down

" ____,ah " I whispered her name as tears finally went there way down burning my cheeks

"God please help her ..  I love her ……. Please save her …..  “I said as I burst out crying

I wanted to see her but I'm afraid her condition will be worse if she heard my voice but I really wanted to see her! I wanted to hit myself; I wanted to kill myself right now

 I couldn't take it; I stood up and head back to the hospital straight to where ____ was laying in the clod room all alone lifelessly

My heart was beating so fast, nobody was here everyone left already; I walked slowly to her bed, all I could hear is her heart beating along with the peep … peep sound

I approached her quietly; I held her cold hand warming it with mine; as I tried to breathe properly and balance my shaky voice  

" ____, its Lay …… " My voice was shaking crazily; tears were choking me to death now

" ____, I know how much you hate me … But please open your eyes ….. I want to see your eyes ____ …..hmm? " I hummed waiting for any reaction from her as I felt the hot tears falling again  as I couldn’t control it

 

_____ POV

 I felt someone after a while again beside me I could feel the warm on my hands as someone was holding it hard as if he’s afraid I’ll run away to somewhere ….

" ____, I'm sorry, I really am … “ I heard him pronouncing the words heavily

"It's him …..  It's Lay; I wanted to open my eyes; I wanted to tell him that I'm okay” I hated hearing him crying; I wanted to move but I couldn’t . .

 

Lay POV

" ____, wake up  --  I want to eat your food again; I want you to wake me up; I want you to call me Oppa! Don’t make me suffer like this …”

“ I want to see your smile that bring me happiness …….  Come on wake up your Oppas are so sad and worried about you …. you hate to see them suffering don't you? yeah?” I said wiping away my tears

“ ____ ah ….. Come on open your eyes your killing me! “I said putting my head on her hand and cried my heart out again I just couldn’t bare the pain in my chest right now and I couldn’t stop myself from crying; but suddenly I felt someone patting my head softly as you can barely notice that someone is actually patting your head …… My heart stopped beating for a moment and my head shoot up; I saw ____! Her eyes were opened and she was smiling tiredly while heavily blinking that you can barely tell that her eyes are opened  ……

"Don't cry …… I'm alright “she said slowly almost whispering and  slowly closed her eyes again

" NO! No! Stay awake please ____ah! “I said then ran out of the room calling for the doctors they came running with me ….

"She opened her eyes, she's awake " I saw the doctor making sure as he put the lighter in her eye

"I guess you were just  ... Imagining “ the doctor said and patted my shoulder and headed toward the door to leave

"No! No ….. I swear she opened her eyes!!!!!"  

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AttractiveJunmyeon
#1
Chapter 32: I cried a lot with this story, It was amazing though. I love Yixing so much!! I like it! Great ending very cute with full of emotions :3 Great job Authornim! Keep writing Fighting Fighting! :)
jessi828 #2
Chapter 30: aish....i want some more chapters...more happy and romantic moments....anyways good job author nim :)
nerdyviv #3
Chapter 30: wow this is one damn good story!!! authornim i salute to you!! :D good job!!! hehe
SeoMate01
#4
Such an AMAZING story author!!! one of my new favorites! :) its so sweet and you got me crying on some chapters. Keep up the good work!
RiRiCassiEXOtic
#5
Chapter 1: i love this!!! good job author-nim!
nurili #6
i think i read it somewhere but the main is junghyubg from beast..hahaha ur the same author right,,,,
Jiyeon_JN
#7
Chapter 33: Cool! I'll be checking it out! ;)
exosaranghae0 #8
Chapter 31: I loved this story..i cried when i read this...You're such a good writer authornim <3
Murena
#9
Hiiii i just want to say that this is really GREAT i couldn't stop reading till the end !! normally o/c stories annoy me but this one has a very good scenario !! Thank you !!!! Love !!!
wardah27
#10
Amazing story 。◕‿◕。