Chapter 8 -- Ageless

Monsters: The Mousetrap

Hana closed her eyes, her mind already drifting off, her muscles relaxed as she fell asleep. The amount of brain power required to figure out this problem bothered her tremendously. She had yet to figure anything out so she needed an edge on the competition.

She fell into a dream world as she walked through alleyways and skyscrapers. The world looked similar to Seoul but it seemed to be darker than usual. The skies were grey and overcast and she looked around to see that the world was monochrome.

This wasn’t real and she knew it, but she continued to walk around and every face she saw was solemn. As if they knew something was wrong, as if they knew something bad had happened.

She reached out and tried to stop someone but they just brushed her hand away and ran off. She frowned to herself before she walked past an old electronics store.

It was small but it had all the necessities, big screen televisions, compact music players, all the newest technology in one place. The channel had been to the news and she saw a male reporter on the screen. He had blonde hair and sincere eyes, when he smiled, it looked genuine. 

But the words leaving his mouth were that of bad news. Hana listened to what he had to say, “In breaking news, another young woman has gone missing today, this is the sixth disappearance in two months and the rate of them have been escalating. No witnesses have said anything conclusive to the investigation and police are still searching for the perpetrator.” He explained.

Hana pressed herself against the glass and she kept her eyes glued on the television, every word that man had said was similar to her problems of real life. But how could that even be possible, this was a dream it wasn’t reality. Unless it was her subconscious trying to tell her something. She shook off the thoughts in her head as the man on the news continued talking.

“The only thing that the police have shared is that it is a male taking these woman, in the middle of the night. No reason why and they have been unable to find motive due to the dramatic differences between each woman as well. Something that could be said that these women have in common? Their beauty.” The man said. “But that is all that the police have shared with the press.”

Hana gasped as she realized that’s the only conclusion she had reached as well. In this world, she had no choice of finding out the truth either since her sub conscious couldn’t even figure it out.

“And now, we will take a quick break and when we come back, we will have Jae with the weather report.” The man said as he disappeared off the screen and commercials came on. A woman with short hair came out in a red dress that showed a little bit of cleavage and a little bit of leg. She walked around an old style room that was sort of a bar. She smirked and smiled to the camera before she sat down.

“Never tell people your secret to looking beautiful.” She winked to the camera and brought a finger to her lips before the commercial ended. 

Hana had remembered seeing that commercial before, she had never really bothered with television but she had saw it in passing just once. The woman was flawless and ageless despite her real age and she never looked a day past 21.

After the commercial ended, the gossip show started on the television and Hana walked away when she heard the woman’s voice. She never liked the gossip shows but she had seen this segment once as well.

“In other news, Miss Jeong Hyosung has made it into another CF. She always seems to look younger and younger every year even though she is reaching her mid-30s. She is definitely proving the industry wrong by retaining her youth and keeping her in the game as she takes on CFs that would normally go to those 10 years her junior.” The woman said. “What is her secret?”

Hana looked on as she saw the comparison between Hyosung at 20 and Hyosung at 34. There was really no difference, no real difference between the two, she couldn’t even see any aging in her eyes either and that’s where most people aged first. Her jaw dropped in surprise, she should have paid more attention.

The vain part of her was hoping that she would look like that when she was 35 while the other part was wondering why her sub conscious wanted her to remember this commercial. Why did it matter who this person was in the investigation?

She had nothing to base on for this and no reason to believe that they were bad or anything. She had nothing to go on at this point, but if her dreams were telling her to remember Jeong Hyosung then she had nothing to lose by investigating her.

She turned from the screen before walking right into a solid wall of muscle, her shoulder took most of the impact and she knew she would have a bruise if this was real.

“Sorry.” She said as the person caught her shoulders and straightened her up before she fall on her .

“It’s fine. I’m just glad you’re okay.” He said as he gave her a sweet eye smile before nodding and walking away.

She turned to get a better look at him but by then the world had disappeared and she found herself opening her eyes back in her own apartment. She reached for her phone immediately and checked the time. It was already twelve noon. She had fallen asleep before the sun came up so she knew she had gotten more than her normal two hours.

It was probably the most sleep she had ever gotten in a very long time. She stretched for a moment before climbing off the couch to get ready for a brand new day. She had something to go on, thanks to her dream and maybe now she would actually be able to discover something.


Author's Note;
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0330-TBA
#1
Chapter 27: CH 25: Whoa that was some monster there. Anna~~~~ TT____________________________________TT But now time to find out some secrets and be reunited with Seungyub too~~ <3

CH 26: Sad to see it end~~ TT______________TT But it was SO DANG good~!!! <3 <3 <3 Really did love this!! :D Now onto Khun~~~ <3 Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUCCCHHHH~~~~~ <3 Love you~~~~~ Hehehe Seungyub got the hint XDDDDD
0330-TBA
#2
Chapter 25: I accidentally deleted the comments up until this point!!!! WAAAHHHHHH~~~!!!! TT_________TT

CH 15: WOO~~~!!!! THEY'RE TALKING!!!!! YEEEAAAAHHHH~~~~ XD But 15 people??? Dang! I didn't even know that many girls were taken :O

CH 16: She finally figured it all out! Woo!! But Anna... Where'd she go TT_______TT AHH!!!! She CAME!!! WAHHHHHHHH~~!!!

Ch 17: Yoshi~! Heard everything now just have to figure out how to beat the little witch. *fist pump* Poor Kiki though~ That must really sting every time he hears that from her (That he's the real monster). Crazy crazy stuff right there~!!!

CH 18: Whoa! He's SO caring~~ <3 <3 <3 <3 ADORABLE~~!!!!! Looks like things are progressing~~~ }:D (Hahahah XD Your inner battle XDD SO FUNNY!!! XDDD)

CH 19: Now she's using her as a threat to make Kiki go and do the dirty job?!?!?!?! What the H man. That's not cool. She gonna get her kicked~ >:| *On a side not super great to see how close they are getting now }:D

CH 20: WOO~~!! Figured out like everything I'm pretty sure! PLUS~ Got to still be in the same cell as KIKI!!!!! AHHH!!!!! So happy!!!!! (HAHAHAHA XD It's ok~~~ Even without it'll be amazing~~~!! XD

CH 21: Awwh man! He heard the last part?? TT______TT I llooooovvveee yoooouuuuuu <3 Hehehe. Yay for Kiki x Hana action~~!!!

CH 22: OMAGAWSHH!!!!! Just like aisdhlkadskfnkaljdslkgjaklsdngkanksdf. CAN NOT EVEN. Just died. Legit died. WAHH!!!!!!! (Now waiting anxiously to see what a white rose means)

Ch 23: Yeaahh~~~~ He just picked her up and boom. Taken care of. XD SOOOOO Excited to see where this will go~~!!!

CH 24: THEY KISSED~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then the old hag left and now the girls are back to normal~~ HEY!! Maybe they'll find Anna!!! Oh, maybe she was in a different cell??!?! Wait. Or maybe... idk. I'll wait XD
0330-TBA
#3
Chapter 9: CH 1: WAHH!!!!!! THIS IS ALREADY SO FREAKIN' COOL!!!!! WAHHH!!!!! Psh! Lame-o cops! Why ain't you doing your dang job?!!? Leaving it all to Seungyub and I. PSH!! But we can do a better job anyways :P DOJOON!!! WAHHH!!! I feel like I am seriously going to die during these series. Like OMGosh. Just dying and nothing really has even happened yet oh man. orz *fangirling too hard probs*

CH 2: So smart. Keeping the door in view at all times. Also making sure that no one can sneak up from behind. WOO! Awe, Yuri seems really sad! D; Glad to be helping out :) I wonder if that guy has any connection :O

CH 3: Whoa!! They're slowly finding out more and more!! Woo!!!! :) Seungyub is such a great helper/friend!! <3 FRIES~~~!!

CH 4: Her friend got taken too?!?!?! This guy is crazy!!! So sad TT_________TT Man Seungyub is insane! Super amazing!!!!! YAY FOR INVESTIGATING~~~~! XD

CH 5: I honestly have no idea either XD I have the same questions! XD AH! The guy man. Must be SUPER smart to just grab that many people and throw the police off that much so that they don't investigate :/

CH 6: ANOTHER ONE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Cube Ent..... Hmm..... Hyuna?! PS, I'm starting to want to eat one of those XD Sounds so delicious~~~

CH 7: DANG IT! It was Gayoon... I was close though XD Yoseob?? Poor Yoseob~! But really he's taken a girl a lot faster than before and now has taken a girl that was in a relationship. Boom. Things have changed plus the theories to the questions before have changed too I'm sure XD (Oh and your dancing is way good!!!)

CH 8: WHOA! This is so cool!! Dream revelation!!! Like everything during her dream is helping her out! And maybe even that guy has some meaning!!! WOOOOAAAAAHHH!! OH! And I see what you did there with Hyosung and secret XDDD (Everyone is so pretty. They're all good at dancing)
sam098 #4
Chapter 27: Wow! You are so awesome!!! I love yhis story!!
Do you wrote pther Beast stories too??
kpopfanforever77
#5
Chapter 26: You gave hints about the guy and girl convo?! i didnt even catch it!
Lyli21 #6
Chapter 27: I really enjoy this story so much. you bring my mood high and down author-nim. keep writing.
luv_kero
2447 streak #7
Chapter 27: I've really enjoyed reading this story and the mystery has kept me on my toes since I first subscribed! ^-^ You're a great story-teller, with your subtle hints sprinkled throughout the chapters. It's been a rollercoaster of a ride, trying to figure out all (or at least most, haha) of the secrets in this story. Ki Kwang is such a sweetheart and I'm so glad he's got a happy ending now! x] Kudos to you for a great job and I'm excited to read the next installment with Nichkhun! :)