Chapter 15 - The Monster

Monsters: The Mousetrap

Kiki watched the girl he had brought it in, he had yet to learn her name but he could understand her words. She spoke to him like he was retarded, which given the circumstances, wasn’t her fault. He listened to her question before he decided to give an answer.

“You’re the one who took the girls away?” She asked him. He gave her a sad nod. He didn’t need to be reminded of his wrongdoings over and over again.

“Hyosung asked you do it?” She asked him. He nodded again, that woman blackmailed him into this constantly. How he had gotten here, he wasn’t sure anymore. The memories were too far away, he only knew the first day Hyosung had gotten attached to this city and the first girl he had taken.

“She is taking the youth from the girls?” She questioned. She sounded like she needed to make sure of something, which he didn’t blame her for since she had researched the spell that Hyosung was using.

He nodded again, he was waiting for her to ask the real question. He knew the girl hadn’t figured out where the girls went and who the elderly ladies were. She just needed to ask and he could point at them for her, since that would be the only way for her to figure it out.

“So she believes in that old spell, huh?” She said aloud, it didn’t seem like a legitimate question so Kiki didn’t answer her, but he saw her looking. Her back was to him but the way sound carried in here let him hear her next words.

“So where did the women go?” She mumbled. That was the only thing she couldn’t figure out, here she was in the lair of the evil witch and she couldn’t figure out where the women went. Hana heard a grunt from behind her again and looked at the monster, “What?” She asked.

He pointed his fingers at the jail cells all around them and made some more incoherent noises, “There?” She asked him. He nodded his head and grunted. She immediately ran towards the cells and all the ladies looked at her with pleading eyes.

“You guys are the girls she stole?” She said and all their heads nodded, they opened their mouths and she saw almost all of them had no teeth. “She aged you guys after she took your youth for herself.” She concluded as she looked around at all of them.

“You know that it’s not his fault though right?” She looked at all of them, some nodded, others just glared. “That woman is controlling him, has he ever looked like he wanted to take you guys?” She asked.

All of them shook their heads this time. There was some attempt at muttering but with their ineffective enunciation it was difficult. She sighed, “Well, let me ask then. Where’s Gayoon?” She said. One of the ladies in the cell across raised her hand.

Looking at the woman in the light now, she could see all of Gayoon’s features from her picture were just aged. “Your boyfriend Yoseob is looking for you, my name is Hana. I’ve been investigating all of your disappearances.” She said.

“Where’s Bae Suji?” She asked next. A girl in the cell in front of her raised her hand. She was still wearing the clothes she had on when she disappeared.

“Okay, and Park Bo Young?” She asked, a tiny little girl peeked out from behind Suzy. She was tiny, that was unexpected given the picture and footage she had seen. Must have been the heels she was wearing.

“Im Yoona?” A girl in the cell across waved her hands up. “Okay, good good, and Lee Jieun?” A hand stuck out from one of the cell farther away. 

She was scared to ask for her name, her friend was the first, she just knew it. The first one of this city, she had to find her. But who were all these other girls..? Between Anna’s disappearance and her wake-up call? 

“Anna?” She asked softly. All the girls looked around in surprise, they had never heard that name before it seemed.

The monster behind her grunted and she saw the woman behind it all waiting at her cell door for her. “Come here, Hana. We need to have a conversation.” She said.

“What would you like to talk about Hyosung?” Hana asked her.

Hyosung smiled slyly, “Let’s talk about everything. It’s not like you’ll be seeing the light of day ever again anyway."


Author's Note;;
Another update :3 lol. 
I think I'll finish this soon :o actually.. :o
but anyway~ enjoy :3
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Mousetrap: this story is almost done :D I'm like so close... But I hope you enjoy the coming updates~

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0330-TBA
#1
Chapter 27: CH 25: Whoa that was some monster there. Anna~~~~ TT____________________________________TT But now time to find out some secrets and be reunited with Seungyub too~~ <3

CH 26: Sad to see it end~~ TT______________TT But it was SO DANG good~!!! <3 <3 <3 Really did love this!! :D Now onto Khun~~~ <3 Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUCCCHHHH~~~~~ <3 Love you~~~~~ Hehehe Seungyub got the hint XDDDDD
0330-TBA
#2
Chapter 25: I accidentally deleted the comments up until this point!!!! WAAAHHHHHH~~~!!!! TT_________TT

CH 15: WOO~~~!!!! THEY'RE TALKING!!!!! YEEEAAAAHHHH~~~~ XD But 15 people??? Dang! I didn't even know that many girls were taken :O

CH 16: She finally figured it all out! Woo!! But Anna... Where'd she go TT_______TT AHH!!!! She CAME!!! WAHHHHHHHH~~!!!

Ch 17: Yoshi~! Heard everything now just have to figure out how to beat the little witch. *fist pump* Poor Kiki though~ That must really sting every time he hears that from her (That he's the real monster). Crazy crazy stuff right there~!!!

CH 18: Whoa! He's SO caring~~ <3 <3 <3 <3 ADORABLE~~!!!!! Looks like things are progressing~~~ }:D (Hahahah XD Your inner battle XDD SO FUNNY!!! XDDD)

CH 19: Now she's using her as a threat to make Kiki go and do the dirty job?!?!?!?! What the H man. That's not cool. She gonna get her kicked~ >:| *On a side not super great to see how close they are getting now }:D

CH 20: WOO~~!! Figured out like everything I'm pretty sure! PLUS~ Got to still be in the same cell as KIKI!!!!! AHHH!!!!! So happy!!!!! (HAHAHAHA XD It's ok~~~ Even without it'll be amazing~~~!! XD

CH 21: Awwh man! He heard the last part?? TT______TT I llooooovvveee yoooouuuuuu <3 Hehehe. Yay for Kiki x Hana action~~!!!

CH 22: OMAGAWSHH!!!!! Just like aisdhlkadskfnkaljdslkgjaklsdngkanksdf. CAN NOT EVEN. Just died. Legit died. WAHH!!!!!!! (Now waiting anxiously to see what a white rose means)

Ch 23: Yeaahh~~~~ He just picked her up and boom. Taken care of. XD SOOOOO Excited to see where this will go~~!!!

CH 24: THEY KISSED~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then the old hag left and now the girls are back to normal~~ HEY!! Maybe they'll find Anna!!! Oh, maybe she was in a different cell??!?! Wait. Or maybe... idk. I'll wait XD
0330-TBA
#3
Chapter 9: CH 1: WAHH!!!!!! THIS IS ALREADY SO FREAKIN' COOL!!!!! WAHHH!!!!! Psh! Lame-o cops! Why ain't you doing your dang job?!!? Leaving it all to Seungyub and I. PSH!! But we can do a better job anyways :P DOJOON!!! WAHHH!!! I feel like I am seriously going to die during these series. Like OMGosh. Just dying and nothing really has even happened yet oh man. orz *fangirling too hard probs*

CH 2: So smart. Keeping the door in view at all times. Also making sure that no one can sneak up from behind. WOO! Awe, Yuri seems really sad! D; Glad to be helping out :) I wonder if that guy has any connection :O

CH 3: Whoa!! They're slowly finding out more and more!! Woo!!!! :) Seungyub is such a great helper/friend!! <3 FRIES~~~!!

CH 4: Her friend got taken too?!?!?! This guy is crazy!!! So sad TT_________TT Man Seungyub is insane! Super amazing!!!!! YAY FOR INVESTIGATING~~~~! XD

CH 5: I honestly have no idea either XD I have the same questions! XD AH! The guy man. Must be SUPER smart to just grab that many people and throw the police off that much so that they don't investigate :/

CH 6: ANOTHER ONE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Cube Ent..... Hmm..... Hyuna?! PS, I'm starting to want to eat one of those XD Sounds so delicious~~~

CH 7: DANG IT! It was Gayoon... I was close though XD Yoseob?? Poor Yoseob~! But really he's taken a girl a lot faster than before and now has taken a girl that was in a relationship. Boom. Things have changed plus the theories to the questions before have changed too I'm sure XD (Oh and your dancing is way good!!!)

CH 8: WHOA! This is so cool!! Dream revelation!!! Like everything during her dream is helping her out! And maybe even that guy has some meaning!!! WOOOOAAAAAHHH!! OH! And I see what you did there with Hyosung and secret XDDD (Everyone is so pretty. They're all good at dancing)
sam098 #4
Chapter 27: Wow! You are so awesome!!! I love yhis story!!
Do you wrote pther Beast stories too??
kpopfanforever77
#5
Chapter 26: You gave hints about the guy and girl convo?! i didnt even catch it!
Lyli21 #6
Chapter 27: I really enjoy this story so much. you bring my mood high and down author-nim. keep writing.
luv_kero
2447 streak #7
Chapter 27: I've really enjoyed reading this story and the mystery has kept me on my toes since I first subscribed! ^-^ You're a great story-teller, with your subtle hints sprinkled throughout the chapters. It's been a rollercoaster of a ride, trying to figure out all (or at least most, haha) of the secrets in this story. Ki Kwang is such a sweetheart and I'm so glad he's got a happy ending now! x] Kudos to you for a great job and I'm excited to read the next installment with Nichkhun! :)