You're Taken?

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Minseok and Jongdae meet on a train. Jongdae is pretty forward, but Minseok is already taken. 
Sooner or later they become friends, and sooner or later Jongdae really starts to fall. 
But Minseok has a girlfriend, so that kinda .

 

Minseok looked at his phone and checked the time, only lessening his mood as it turns out he hadn’t even been on the train for two minutes.  Sighing, he mindlessly scrolled up and down his Facebook feed, until after what could have been a few seconds or minutes the train harshly swerved, and all of a sudden he found himself pushed up against the walls of the train with two hands either side of his face. Minseok followed the line of the arms and finally came to the owner of said hands, and what he noticed was that this guy had the most amazing jawline and was staring at him with a certain expression that he couldn’t quite comprehend.

Now, standing this close to a random stranger was nice and all, but Minseok felt quite awkward with the way that this guy was looking at him, especially as he had been doing it for a good 20 seconds. “Uhh - are you going to-,” Minseok stuttered, feeling nervous under the constant stare, “…Move your arms?”

The man snapped out of his reverie and smiled what could have been the most beautiful smile Minseok had ever seen. “Oh, sorry about that, the train turned and I wasn’t stable enough. Then I just got caught up looking at your face. Good job on that one. Ten out of ten for genetics.”

Minseok looked at him awkwardly, “You’re quite forward, don’t you think?”

The stranger smirked, “Well, what’s the use of talking in riddles?  I might as well tell you what’s on my mind – I mean it’s not like you didn’t notice me staring anyway.”

Minseok stood there, a slight blush covering his cheeks – he never could take compliments well, “Didn’t you ever learn it was rude to stare?”

The stranger continued to smirk, “But shouldn’t we appreciate the finer things in life?”

Minseok laughed, mainly out of embarrassment, “You don’t even know my name.”

“But a name is just a word, is it not?”

“It’s a pretty important one though, isn’t it?”

The stranger stood in thought, before nodding, “You have a point... So tell me; what is it?”

Minseok rolled his eyes. “It’s Minseok, and yours? It’d be nice to whether my girlfriend murders you after she finds out about this, what if I don’t have a TV nearby?”

Stranger’s eyes widened, before laughing, “My names Jongdae, but you’re taken? Damn... Since when?”

Minseok went over the name in his head before he’d registered what he had said. Said creepy stranger with the name Jongdae was sad he was taken, what is this? “Since last week, actually,” he said smiling, he had been pining over this girl for weeks, and in the end he didn’t even have to ask her out because she did it.

Jongdae frowned before smiling, “Damn, I just missed out, didn’t I?”

“Guess you did,” Minseok shrugged. He was into guys too. “but I’ve liked her for a while, so I don’t even know.”

“Well she must be pretty lucky then, for you to like her.”

Minseok grinned, “Oh but I’m the lucky one. She’s SNSD quality.”

Jongdae gasped, “Wow, I’ve got no chance.”

 

Foreword

Wow, I'm back with a new fic ^-^ 
RUN FOR THE HILLS!

There isn't enough XiuChen in the world, so here is some for the deprived :)
Its definitely not the best EXO fic out there, but there are so little XiuChen and I'm happy with how this turned out, so I hope you are too c:

I've already finished, so it'll be updated every Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and Sunday which gives me time to edit c:

OH! And never be afraid to chat to me, I'd love it if you did ^-^ I am practically always on Tumblr, or feel free to add me on here.

I worked really hard on this, so I hope you all like it, and please tell me what you think and I'll love you forever. 
(Please don't judge the story from the little description before the excerpt okay it's pretty bad.)

Thank you! I really hope you enjoy c:

No poster until I make one ;-; I don't want to take someones edit or something by accident :/

 

 

2016 UPDATE:

Oh dear I really posted this a while ago. My writing has changed a lot (for the better I hope). Or maybe I'm just overreacting and it's actually fine. I'll never know.

Reading it back now I cringe a little and if someone was to read it out loud I'd probably die a little (especially the authors notes h e l p  m e) but I'm not going to take it down because even though it definitely isn't my favorite thing I've ever written its one of the most popular ones I have and I still get new people subbing/upvoting/commenting so I must have done something alright. If people are going to enjoy reading it that makes me happy. Especially in this deprived fandom of XiuChen.

I've edited it the past few weeks to fix up some grammatical errors and things that made me cringe a little too much. I think I've removed like 98% of the cringe. I hope. The other 2% is standard cringe. Maybe I'm just overreacting. I did leave all the authors notes though because I think they really do show my feelings from the time HAHA and I'm sentimental. I give you permission to cringe.

Thanks for everyone that's stuck with this fic, and to the new readers that still enjoy it. It really means a lot to me.

 

 

I've done other stuff too.
The Benefits of Having A Dumb Best Friend (SuLay) | The Disadvantages of Having a Not-So-Dumb Boyfriend (SuLay) | Let's Get Personal (SuLay) | Away With You  (SuLay) |  Painfully Oblivious (SuLay) | Wanna Know Your Name (SuLay) | Just A Tease (Submit For Me) (XiuChen) | Pretend With Me  (XiuChen) | Kind of Worthwhile (KaiSoo) | I'll Be Your Canvas (KaiSoo) | 'Till I Bleed Your Name (KaiSoo) | Whatever We Are (HunHan) | You May Not Think It (But You're Perfect To Me) (HunHan) | Bedtime Stories (and Perfect Matches) (TaoRis)|  It's All Fun and Games at EXO Studios (OT12) |

 

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This just hit over 500 subs whAAAAAAAT?? Idek if it deserves that many tbh but thank you ❤

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FlowerBaozi
#1
Chapter 16: Read it again and I am still laughing so hard. Gosh! The punch lines are just so smooth and fluffy plus Lilu is just really crazy. XiuChen is just the cutest ship! Thank you. I really did enjoy your stories!
FlowerBaozi
#2
Chapter 16: Looooooollllll! Lots of looooools! I looooovvvveeee it!!!! Thanks author-nim
Meendaes
#3
Chapter 16: Oh my god I just finished reading this and I can't stop smiling ssdfcgvn they are soooo cute and luhan! I need a friend like luhan
Meendaes
#4
Before I start reading this, I wanna thank you for not deleting it. Xiuchen community needs more xiuchen things
Gloriamiconi #5
Chapter 15: THIS IS MY FAV XIUCHEN FANFIC SO FAR, AND I’VE READ A LOT OF THEM,,, THANK YOU SO MUCH <3 <3
xocberry
#6
Chapter 16: that was wild lololol <3
chocolatecheese #7
Chapter 16: I really love how you make the characers in here authornim.. thanks for spreading love!!♥♥
taitotaii #8
Chapter 16: I am completely in love with your story!<3 So I just spent the last couple of hours reading this in one go. Your writing is great, I'm looking forward to read the rest of your older stories as well as any new fanfics you are going to upload!<3
Penguinkyungsoo #9
Chapter 16: This was the best XiuChen I've ever read, no joking! The plot was so interesting and the character's personalities were well assorted and very well-finished : every detail just made the story special.
ikusabas #10
Chapter 16: this is amazing!! thank you for writing xiuchen, fics of them are hard to find compared to other exo pairings :'))