Title: 4/5
Personally, your title was interesting in its own way. My first impression of the title was playful but quixotic. Though, shouldn’t the correct title be ‘It’s Fate that is Playing with us’?

Poster/Background: 4/10
Well, since you didn’t use a poster or a background, I found it unfair to lessen all 10 points. I do advocate creating or requesting both because, somehow, readers tend feel more of the urge to read the story.

Foreword: 10/10
Nothing much I can say about your forewords, other than it was purely breathtaking. The simple mistake she had taken by stepping outside the door had caused her life to entirely alternate forever. Your exact first sentence captured my attention, her thoughts, her feelings, and her regret.

Plot: 13/15
Well, I must mention that the plot is based on the ‘Timeless’ video, therefore it was not, in a way, an original plot by you. The original plot of the music video was amazing; you managed to interleave your own thoughts as I read through your story, such as adding Junsu’s character. A woman who had been hurt deeply, continually moving on from her lost love to a new relationship, you did very well! :D

Creative/Originality: 14/15
Although your story was based on someone else’s idea, you managed to receive inspiration from the video, and from there on, you carried with your own design. I acknowledged that it was quite amazing to base a story on a simple music video; by the way, your story is th