21st Birthday Present

A New Sign of Love

so I was wondering do you guys like the long chapters cuz I can shorten them if you'd like or break them apart into seperate chapters it'll be faster updates too. Im sure when I do update you guys might think "damn i gotta read all that!!" lol im sorry let me know and i'll arrange the chapters to be a little shorter^^

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The driver took my luggage and placed it into the trunk then opened the door for us to get inside.

Kieu handed me a tissue from the mini bar. I blew my nose then awed at the interior.

“The seats are so nice I not sure my deserves to sit on this”

She giggled “Its all for you”

“What do you mean? you paid for this?...Kieu I didn't realize how much you loved me!”

I bat my eyes at her and she shoved me with her arm.

“Um no I have no money for that and my parents surely wouldn't pay for me to be driven around in car this nice or in a limo for that matter”

I laughed. Although she says that Kieu is spoiled by her parents, often giving her money for any necessities she needs which manly went to clothes and food.

“Im happy your feeling a little better”

I nodded wiping my nose again with the ball of tissue in my hand “As long as I don't reflect on it too much its bearable”

“We’ll talk about it later?” I nodded still in the back of my mind I tried to focus on the night I wanted to sleep so bad. I laid down on Kieu’s shoulder and slowly started to drift off to sleep.

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“Layla” she jiggled my head with a roll of her shoulder.

“Wake up sleepy” 

I winced blinking my eyes to focus. I almost forgot I was wearing a little makeup you might think me crazy for even bothering to where makeup on a 12hr flight but the dark circles on my eyes gave me the image of a middle aged woman. Its embarrassing. I leaned into the tinted window and saw we were going down the path of so many tall executive buildings not to mention the crazy packed traffic ahead of us.

“Uh where are we going?”

“Yah....its time to cover you your eyes” she pulled out a black scarf from her purse and proceeded to put it on me

I blocked her “Woah wait...what?” she dodged my hand and wrapped the scarf around my eyes.

“Kieu whats going on?!”

“Cant”

“You can’t? why...its my birthday”

“Its a surprise”

“really? what kind of a surprise?”

she quietly laughed under her breath “You’ll see”

“mmm not with this scarf around my eyes”

“It’ll be off soon enough”

 

Im sure it was only a couple of minutes but if felt like an hour since I couldn't see anything. I felt the car stop and heard the driver close his door then opened the door on the side of me.

“Wait let me get out first before you fall on your face!”

“Yes please do!” I say sarcastically

Kieu hopped over me then grabbed my hands and slowly guided me out the car.

“Ok where do I go?”

“How would I know I can’t see!!!”

She smacked her lips “Not you!!”

The driver spoke “Go to those double doors and there will be someone waiting just let them know your name and you shouldn't have a problem”

“Kamsahamnida!!” I felt her bow through my hands and I nodded along with her not even sure if I was faced in the right direction.

She giggled “Come on birthday girl!!” 

Keeping a hold on my hand she took her other and wrapped it around my waist and took me.... I don't even know.

Kieu knocked on to what it sounded like a hard metal door. It creaked open.

“Who are you? How did you get over here?”

She spoke quickly enough so the guy wouldn't reject her. “I was told to mention my name...Im Kieu”

It was quiet and without a word we continued to walk forward passing those double doors that slammed behind us.

“Kieu!! where are we?”

“Shhhh”

“Don't shhhh me I want to know whats going on?”

“Geez just cooperate will ya”

I decided to give up I probably wont be able to pour out anymore information from her I’d rather concentrate on my walking instead. Someone pushed a handle latch open and with Kieu’s arms still around me we quickened our pace through another set of doors. I was walking blindly through what it seemed like a crowed hallway. I felt people rush by me almost losing my footing a couple of times but Kieu quickly held me up regaining my balance. It was loud. It sounded like we entered a huge dome with the pounding base of music reverberating of the walls barely making out the rhythm of the sound, along with a blur of conversations, people yelling, and footsteps all colliding together. I couldn't possibly be where I think I am...could I?

“K-kieu..” before I could ask her one last time I felt myself being handed off to another pair of hands who made me walk even faster through the crowd.

I didn't pay anymore attention to what I was stepping on which felt like cords and paper being slid around and just focused on trying to keep up with this person. The base grew louder along with the music and I was quickly able to decipher what I was hearing. The music stopped which was quickly followed by roaring crowd cheering for BEAST.

*OH MY GOD!! Im at their concert!* The person stopped me right before the entrance of the stage. I lost all feeling in the limbs of my body, my face heated up and by breathing became unstable. I was nervous, excited, and shocked all at once literally on the verge of a panic attack.

Doojoon spoke “Beauties!!!” the crowd roared even louder then they already were

We have a fan with us here today and it just so happens to be her birthday!

“Oh hell no!!”

I blocked out any further words he had to say and I turned around to run away when I only rammed my body into some big dude. I still had my blindfold on and realizing that no one was holding me back I quickly pulled off the scarf and saw what I initially assumed. But there were 2 of them. They smiled innocently which only freaked me out even more considering their size.

“U-um can I leave?”

One guy shook his head “Im sorry miss we were ordered to keep you here until they come to get you.”

I gulped “They?”

Help us give her the best birthday you guys SOLICHILA!!!” 

[A/N: means scream/yell you might have seen Yoseob say it in a fancam when he revealed his godlike abs lol sry if its spelled wrong also got it off google and again sorry for interrupting]

 

One of the sound technicians that was standing by quickly grabbed my arm and walked me onto the stage. I tired to fight my way backstage but once the bright lights shined on me I gave up on fussing. The crowd cheered even louder once they saw me walk out. My heart wanted to jump out of my chest and butterflies began filling up my stomach experiencing intense stage fright.

Hyunseung was the first to approach me taking my hand from the worker and walking me to the middle of the floor where there stood a chair. I looked at him with fear the thought of a million plus fans watching me scared me to bits.

He only smiled at me mouthing. “Its ok”

I looked ahead of me and saw that the boys were scattered at separate ends of the stage. I quickly scanned the stage for Yoseob but I couldn't spot him out of the 5 still adjusting to the bright florescent stage lights. Hyunseung sat me on the chair bringing the microphone to his lips. “Happy Birthday” the music started in that second. 

Oasis. The biggest smile was brought to my face. I loved this song. I'm much in tuned with their music now becoming an instant B2uty myself....I wonder why.

Kiwang came up to me and grabbed my hand from my lap and serenaded me with his verse. Once he finished Hyunseung came back  from behind slightly squeezing my shoulder signaling me to relax. I couldn't. I was at the edge of me seat. My nerves turned into true joy; really touched by their efforts. They each handed me a red rose and when they would walk away to sing on other ends of the stage I would catch Yoseob at the corner of my eye, teasingly hiding from me. I saw a smirk on his face when I fell for his trick, pretending to approach me to only turn the corner at the last minute....jerk.

Junhyung broke my concentration when he pulled me up from my chair to slowly progress to the front of the stage. My nerves came back again seeing each girl either glaring or cheering at me. Slightly making me reminisce on the past B2uty killers. Junhyung swayed my hand to the music and I mirrored his rhythm. He then handed me the last rose then backed away from me. I smiled so big admiring 5 beautifully bloomed roses in my hand. I looked up and realized I was left alone at the center of the stage. The crowds cheering volume spiked startling me by their sudden reaction. I watched the LCD screens above me trying to see if I had missed something that had happened behind me and in that second each camera that corresponded to each individual screen, all had their focus on Yoseob. Before I could register what he was doing I felt a tap on my shoulder.

He was the last to approach me, handing me a full bouquet of white roses that matched each of their white suits *I’ll never get used to the flowers he give me*. Small beads of sweat rolled down his cheek I could see he was exhausted but still managed to keep a smile on his face for his fans and for me. They gathered around me and towards the end of the song each were centered under a spotlight. I cupped my mouth almost wanting to cry. I was in utter surprise. I cant even imagine the intense planning they had to do to devise this...just for me.

 

You make me fly and smile again

Biondwi mujigae cheoreom sori eobshi 

nawi pume angyeo 

haengbogeul jweo

I wanna make love

They each gestured their hands to me and added a "HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!" to the end of the song. In unison they bowed at the last note and I broke down in tears. This was the best ending to my birthDAY.

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Ehh kinda short but I wanted to update it felt like forever urg.

A Part 2 is comming shes so spoiled!!

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angeseop #1
Chapter 31: haha lol when i read it n finished it,it was already as well 2am in the moning
Predawn #2
Chapter 21: Its already 2015 ^^ so its a long time since you wrote this story...
But i really really love this story and i love that the chapters are not that short as the other chapters from other writers..:)
U descirbe exactly the feelings of the character and all ur readers will notice that u spend a lot of time for this story to write and that u work hard for each chapter...

Thats why I wanna say thank u for this awesome story and for spending ur time to write and share this story with us :)!

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And sry for my bad english ^^ i'm from germany ^^
excitedventure #3
Coming back to read this story, ughhh i just love this story very much......
excitedventure #4
Totally like the Characterization for Layle, it's just like MEEEEEE! ^_^ :)
excitedventure #5
I wish it would just happen like this in reality. I miss yoseob
excitedventure #6
Chapter 18: What was the song that you use the lyrics at the ending when yoseob is singing.
Jackyyu101 #7
Chapter 37: OMO OMO OMO THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVERRRRR OMG I COULDN'T STOP READING IT WAS JUST TOO AMAZING :D KEEP WRITING !!
Suddenrush- #8
this is omg so amazing... i love this so much
dm_robot #9
Chapter 22: Yeah!!! I LOVE IT XD pleasee update soon! !!!!!
LittleLaau #10
Chapter 37: Hey I just finished reading it and WOW!! It was really really good! Thank you ^^