Imperceptible

Written in the Wind of Whimsy

 

Prompt 4: Imperceptible ( min 125 words)
Kim Xiah Junsu, Park Micky Yoochun, Kim Jaejoong
415 words

 


The fan meeting would soon start, the auditorium was full of  fans who were shrieking their hearts out, when they came out smiling and waving their hands to greet them. Flashes from cameras came from all over the whole auditorium. There were many red balloons, red light sticks, posters, placards, their pictures and names being waved by the fans.

Junsu had a blond hair because of his musical play, while Jaejoong and Yoochun had raven hair because they were both on a drama series.

Soon, Junsu as the composer and producer will have his solo album out. And  then he will be promoting it with concerts, fan meetings, album signing and television guesting. He had been busy working on it with Jaejoong. He already talked with a choreographer to do the choreography steps for a few of the songs and they’d talked about a schedule. But for now he was busy with his musical.

Jaejoong already received the script for his coming drama series and already scheduled a reading and meeting of the other would be characters in the drama with the writers, director and producers.

Yoochun was still busy with his drama series, which was still being aired, getting good rating and rave reviews. Fans can’t get enough of his acting in the series and can’t stop talking, tweeting and blogging about it. They were already talking of an award.

The three, who were better known as JYJ, though they had very busy schedules were glad to see their fans.

The fans did not know what the three were going through.   They did not know about the obsessive fans, and the pain it was causing each one of them.

The three were smiling and waiving at their fans, but an imperceptible sadness were in their eyes. The pain they had to keep in their hearts to be able to greet them with their smile.

The three prepared a few songs to sing and dance for their fans, who were loving every second of it and even sang along with them. Everyone was enjoying the event.

The whole auditorium was an ocean of red. And there were flashes of lights here and there.

 

For a moment, the three looked at each other and at the red ocean in front of them and had imperceptible glittering in their eyes. They live for the love of their fans.


They can go on, through the tough road, and uphill climb, just to see this ocean of red.

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Buffalohighschool18 #1
Chapter 3: I miss them all
dream_keeper88
#2
Chapter 24: Aya! This plot could be expanded into a trilogy! ^-^ This could serve as the outline. Nyahaha! I'll beta for you, if you decide to work on this :3
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 20: I like that you were consistent with the mood/tone. It's melancholic. Even her thinking what to eat had a wistful note to it. I actually liked that part between them the most.

Just a few things to re-consider. The first line is a set of phrases and it didn't go well with the rest of the sentences. Perhaps you can do without that line and keep us guessing what's going on than dropping the bomb of leaving the military from the beginning. Try reading it without it and the flow is much better plus his thoughts alone give us a hint on what is going on. Why wouldn't a South Korean male artist not be able to stage right? I am not comfortable writing in present tense, although I have fics using this tense but I can say it worked here. You forgot "full" next to "chock". Chock alone gives a different meaning. And "long blink" was repeated more than twice within a few words in between but I have no synonyms for it.

Keep writing :D
SoshiSaranghae
#4
Chapter 20: That...That was so touching. *wipes tear*
kpopartory
#5
Thanks for the advice, I do appreciate it.
kpopartory
#6
lolol
found my own story in the random story
May 8, 2012
kpopartory
#7
Thank you, for the comment.
I've been thinking about it, and don't know how I'd approach it.
So, I will have to leave it as is for the meantime.