Chapter 11

HOME [GOTWICE FANFICTION]

important author note at the end :)


 

 

 

"I won't give up!!" Mark who was playing games on his laptop turned his head immediately to look at his roommate, Jackson, who was standing in front of the mirror and was like glaring at his reflection. Not to mention that the guy was actually half , with only towel draping over his lower half.

"You okay, dude? Ate anything wrong? Or did you dream anything weird?" Mark asked. Jackson was still in this glare competition (?) with his own reflection.

"With this look, with this hot body, how can I give up? I won't! I'll win this battle. I'll use every skill that I have. I know I can do it!" Jackson talked to himself again. Mark frowned. 

"Win what? Swimming?" Jackson didn't respond, but he smirked to the mirror instead, looking all confident, self-esteem on top of the world. Mark shook his head.

"You're officially crazy. I'm going back to LA," Mark said as he focused back to his game.

 

 

 

Bambam walked in the kitchen and he saw Mina was refilling her bottle with plain water. The girl looked up when she noticed someone's presence, but looked down at her bottle once again when she saw Bambam. Bambam walked approaching her.

"Hey, Mina. You're okay?" Bambam asked. 

"Why would I be not okay?" Mina asked back, with no emotion and Bambam almost shivered at how cold her voice sounded.

"Mina, are you mad at me?" 

"I'm not," Mina answered. I'm just dissapointed.

"So why are you avoiding me like this? Did I do anything wrong? Please tell me," Bambam pleaded. Mina turned her head to look at him, holding the eye contact longer than she had gave him these past couple of days.

"Why don't you figure it out yourself?" Mina said, before walking away from him. Bambam mentally groaned in frustation before he followed Mina.

"So you are mad at me," 

"I'm not," Mina said, stressing the word 'not'. Bambam pouted.

"Then, why? Can you tell me?" Mina ce again to look at him, and both of their steps paused. Mina looked, or maybe glared at Bambam's eyes. Bambam swore he felt the chills all over his body. Mina wasn't the most friendly person he knew, but he had never seen this side of Mina. Her eyes seems like on fire and Bambam could burn himself just by looking at her irises.

"Figure it out by yourself. I don't know that you like to ask this much," Mina said, before she walked away, leaving Bambam frozen on his steps.

Just what did he do wrong?

 

 

 

Youngjae sat nervously on the couch as he kept glancing the staircase. Jackson who noticed it shook his head.

"If I don't know any better, I'd thought you were the one who's going on a date with her," Jackson said. 

"You don't understand it, hyung! It's exciting! I'm happy she finally having the first date in her life," Youngjae replied. Jackson's eyes widened.

"Really? It's the first time in her life?" 

"How many times do I have to tell you, it's not!" Before Youngjae could reply to Jackson, a familiar voice said in annoyance. Youngjae laughed before he turned his head to look at the person, before slowly, his laugh died.

Jeongyeon stood there, looking all ready dressed in the pastel pink dress that she and Youngjae shopped together. Her hair was styled neatly, along with a simple silver hairpin. She had a clutch in her left hand while a pair of white heels in his right. Youngjae's gaze moved up to her face, and noticed that she put on some light make up.

"Wow Yoo Jeongyeon! You seriously look really pretty!" Youngjae complimented sincerely. Jeongyeon flipped her short hair upon hearing his words.

"No, Jeongyeon! Don't ruin your hair!" Sana said before running over to her and fixed her hair. Jeongyeon scoffed.

"Aish... This is so annoying!" She whined. 

"It's worth it, the guy you're meeting will surely fall for you even more!" Jackson said, giving Jeongyeon thumbs up. Jeongyeon grinned at him and gave him finger heart. Jackson squealed happily, making the rest of them laughed along.

"By the way, are you going to be okay wearing that?" Youngjae asked as his lips pointed at the heels in Jeongyeon's hand. 

"I wore them before, so I don't have problem walking in it. I'll just have to endure the pain," Jeongyeon said. Youngjae frowned, but it's not like he could suggest her to wear sneakers too, so there's nothing he could do.

Jeongyeon then felt her phone in the clutch vibrated. When she took out her phone, she gasped as she read the message.

"Oh, he's here," Jeongyeon said. She put on her heels, and Youngjae looked at her worriedly. He stood up from the couch and walked Jeongyeon to the door.

"Have fun, but don't forget to be careful. If he starts acting strange, call me," Youngjae said. Jeongyeon laughed at his words.

"And what? You'll come to save me?" She asked. 

"No, I'll call the cops for you," Youngjae replied and Jeongyeon punched his side. Youngjae laughed.

"I'll get going then," Jeongyeon said. She opened the door and then saw a sport car waiting for her outside. She walked out and waved goodbye to him. Sana and Jackson came to the door too, and Jackson gasped as he saw the expensive car.

"Jeongyeon's boyfriend is that rich??" He asked.

"He's not her boyfriend yet," Youngjae said while his eyes followed Jeongyeon until she dissapeared from his sight. Jackson smirked as he turned to look at Sana, who has the same meaningful smile too.

 

 

 

All of the house member, except for Jeongyeon who was out having dinner with Wonpil, were having dinner together at home. It was the usual lively, loud dinner as always, but in Mark Tuan's head, he was busy thinking about something else.

To be exact, someone.

From time to time, his eyes would landed at Sana who sat opposite of him at the dining table. 

The way her large eyes keep staring at someone as they talk and then dissapear to a cute eye-smile when she laughed, the way her hair falls when she look down, how she naturally takes a dishes and put it in Mina's and Tzuyu's bowl first instead of hers, how she whispers to Tzuyu when the maknae told her she didn't understand the joke and then both of them laugh together.

, she's so attractive.

Mark didn't know how he didn't notice her earlier. But now that he had noticed, he felt like wanting to know her more. Before this, Mark just thought that Sana was a cute girl, but after what Mina told him and he started to notice her more, Mark realized that she's an attentive, caring, kind, a little clumsy and Mark was sure there were many more of her colourful personality that Mark wanted to discover.

Aside from that, the thrilling churns he got in his stomach whenever he looked at her just give him the confirmation that he was definitely, starting to have feelings for her.

 

 

 

Jeongyeon shifted uncomfortably as she noticed Wonpil gave her a glance for probably the 20th time along the ride. 

"Did I make you uncomfortable?" Wonpil asked. Jeongyeon just smiled as she shook her head.

"I'm sorry, it's just, you look really pretty tonight," Wonpil said with a smile.

"Oh... T-thank you," Jeongyeon said. Jeongyeon wasn't sure if she's the only one who felt the heavy awkwardness between the two of them because Wonpil seemed pretty relaxed. 

"By the way, I hope you don't mind this. My parents are waiting at the restaurant. They--"

"Wait, what? Your parents?" Jeongyeon asked with wide eyes. Wonpil nodded.

"Yes, my parents. I didn't plan for you to meet them, but they really want to meet you. I couldn't bear to refuse. Are you okay with it? I can still cancel it with them," Wonpil said. Jeongyeon bit her lower lip. Of course it wasn't okay at all, but if his parents were already waiting, how could she refuse to meet them? 

"Jeongyeon?" Wonpil called, bringing her back to the reality. 

"Ah, yes, I'm sorry. Yeah, I'm okay. I'm... very... excited to meet them," Jeongyeon said, giving Wonpil a smile as sincere as she can. Wonpil smiled widely at her respond.

Jeongyeon slowly zipped open her clutch and took out her phone. She glanced at Wonpil and saw that the guy's attention was on the road. Jeongyeon unlocked her phone and opened her chat with Youngjae.

 

Youngjae Choi

 

I'm meeting his parents

What? You guys getting married already?

Nooooo he said his parents is waiting for us at the restaurant TTTTTT

WHAT? ON FIRST DATE?!?!?!? IS HE CRAZY?

IKR????? I'M SO DEAD 

Ask him to send you back home. right. now.

Lol idk what to do just pray for me

I'm speechless.

Call me if... idk, you want to run away or something

 

Jeongyeon smiled at Youngjae's reply. Thank God for the existence of Choi Youngjae. At least she had plan B all set now.

"It's not good to keep funny things to yourself," Wonpil's voice surprised Jeongyeon and when she looked up, Wonpil had full attention on her because they stopped at the red light. Jeongyeon just laughed lightly before she kept her phone in the clutch again.

"Ah, it's nothing. It's just my friend," Jeongyeon said. Wonpil nodded. The light turned green and the guy's eyes were on the road again.

"You told me that you live with students from other university, right? Do girls and guys live together?" Wonpil asked.

"Yes, they're from different universities and there are guys too in the house," Jeongyeon said.

"Oh, isn't it like... you know, dangerous or something? You barely know the guys. You could be living with a ert or something," Wonpil said. Jeongyeon turned her head to look and Wonpil, as she frowned at his words.

"I live with them long enough and I know all of them are nice guys. If you're talking about when I first lived there, I have my best friend with me so I don't worry about anything," Jeongyeon replied. She was slightly annoyed at Wonpil's words but she was trying hard to make it less obvious. Wonpil glanced at her, and he saw her face changed.

"I'm sorry if I offended you, I was just worried," Wonpil said. Jeongyeon didn't know how to reply to that so she just kept quiet. Not long after, a fancy hotel building came in sight and Wonpil stopped the car in front of the entrance.

"Give me a second," Wonpil said before he unbuckled his seatbelt and got off the car. Soon, Jeongyeon's door was opened and she almost jumped in surprise but felt relieved when she saw that it was just Wonpil, waiting for her with a smile. Jeongyeon stepped out from the car and thanked Wonpil.

"I've been wanting to do that to a girl," Wonpil shyly said. Jeongyeon smiled, looks like Youngjae's prediction was true afterall- this is really Wonpil's first experiece with a girl.

"You don't have to, though. At least with me, you don't have to," Jeongyeon said. 

"That's probably why I like you more, Jeongyeon," Wonpil mumbled, but Jeongyeon could definitely, clearly heard it. She just pretended that she didn't as she felt awkward with his blunt confession coming out of nowhere. She let her eyes wandered around the hotel instead.

She honestly thought her buying this expensive dress for the dinner was over the top but she realized that compared to the luxurious building stood in front of her eyes right now, her dress probably worth the door knob of this hotel's room.

"My parents' restaurant is at the top of this hotel. Let's go, they are excited to meet you,"

Ah, right... His parents...

Jeongyeon could feel the nervousness taking over her system at the mention of his parents. Jeongyeon didn't even has a thought to have serious relationship with him yet and here she is, meeting his parents on their first dinner together. She just want to scream in frustation and just headlock the guy or something but yeah.... Let's just give him a chance first. 

Jeongyeon's body tensed when she felt something, a.k.a someone, a.k.a somehand was holding to hers. She looked down, and looked up again to see Wonpil smiling shyly. Jeongyeon wanted to scream at how uncomfortable she was feeling but... she just closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

This night is gonna be a looooong night.

 

 

 

Youngjae tapped on his phone screen as he stared down at his chat with Jeongyeon. The last text he sent was telling her to call him if she need some escape plan and the girl left him on read. Youngjae couldn't help but be anxious since Jeongyeon didn't reply to his text. What if that Wonpil guy did anything bad to her? Youngjae sent another text to her.

Jeongyeon Yoo

You okay there??????????

 

Youngjae tapped his screen harder while waiting for Jeongyeon to reply, but the reply didn't came. 

 

Jeongyeon Yoo

You okay there??????????

Are you dead?????????????????

 

And still, no reply. 

"Mark hyung," Youngjae called Mark who was sitting on the bean bag. Mark looked up from his phone.

"Yeah?"

"Can I borrow your car?" Youngjae asked. Mark's brows met in confusion.

"Why? Where are you going?" Mark asked back. Of course he didn't mind lending his car but it's just weird because the members rarely borrowed his car unless they're going somewhere further than the mart.

"I'm just... worried about Jeongyeon," Youngjae answered honestly.

"Jeongyeon? She's out for dinner right? Did anything happened?" Mark asked again as he couldn't understand the younger guy's concern. Mark himself saw how Youngjae was hyping up over Jeongyeon's date (yes, he told the whole world that it's Jeongyeon first date in her life), so Mark just didn't get it why Youngjae looked so worried now.

"I don't know, I just have a bad feelings about it. I'll just be on standby though. Not to ruin it or something," Youngjae said. Mark nodded though he was still confused about the situation.

"If you say so, the key is at the cabinet," Mark said. 

"Alright, thank you, hyung!" Youngjae said, giving Mark a smile.

 


 

Well that was an abrupt ending lol. More about Jeongyeon's date in the next chapter ;)

Alright guys, I have something important to say here. I've been contemplating to say this but I don't want to sound rude since I love every single of you guys who reads my story, but... Please do note that I have the story, and the storyline planned beforehand. I also write because of my love towards GoTWICE and some of the pairing. It's not based on reader's request, so please understand if I can't make your ship come true, at least in this fanfic. I can write about your ship and make them together in the story, but I can't guarantee that I'll be able to give my best in writing about them because it's not what I want to write in the first place, and I'm not sure if I can complete the story if you guys keep asking me to write what I don't want :( I don't know how to respond on comments like this and it makes me feel guilty for not writing what my readers want but I don't want to present ty quality content either, not when even my writing right now is still lacking so much.

I'm very sorry if this turned out to sound rude or mean :(

I sincerely thank everyone who read and love this story, I really do appreciate it ♡♡♡♡

Have a nice day everyone :)

-rainbowalien

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Hi i'm sorry for making you wait. Sadly, i don't have the time to sit down and really focus to write a new chapter. My final is coming up next week, after that I'll have a 3-weeks break so hopefully I'll be able to update then. Thank you, I really appreciate your anticipation towards HOME :)

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Tokwa2x
#1
Rereading..
chanbaekzy #2
Chapter 30: I LOVE IT HUHUHUHU GOTWICE JJANG! also i luv the dahbum fluff <33333
Nayeoncee #3
pleaseee updateee
Maayana
#4
Chapter 30: I promised to myself I'll read this chapter after all my exams will end and finally the day arrived! Can't believe this story is about to end soon I want to cryyy ?
Mark and Sana are like the cutest couple EVER!!
Can't wait for the next chapter ❤
kyuseokyu1 #5
Chapter 30: Where is jinyeon?
neccar 146 streak #6
Chapter 20: JeongJae made me soft
Tokwa2x
#7
Chapter 30: Well, well (in maleficent's voice). Look who finally decided to update, hmm? Kidding lol!!! Oh my God! I missed this so much!!!!! This chapter is full on sweets and sugary bubble gums and all. I got hyper, sorry. But anyways, let me just let this out of my chest....ahem...KYAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!. Ok. I'm ok now.
So happy for marksana. Her family loves him already. For tzugyeom, I literally said get a room during their battle of who loves them more. I must say yugyeom is a ah hwa....sweet talker.....ah hwa.. He sure knows what to say to tzuyu to make her smile. Lastly, BaMina. Cute. What more can I say, from what they been through, I think it's safe to safe that they're meant to be together like pieces of a puzzle, they complete each other..... Oh love. Look what you've done.

When will the next update be? I don't mean to to rush you but that's what I really meant.....Kidding (serious face).

I wonder what Momo's dad's reaction's gonna be, if Jackson ever got the chance to meet her family like mark.
In real life tho, I already feel bad for Momo's future bf cuz have you seen her Dad's biceps? Mina too, but since her dad looks sweet, her brother on the other hand is huge asf. He'll be like, touch my sister and I'll end you.
ohayoDUBU
#8
Chapter 29: It has been long time I have not smiling like this when I'm reading a fanfic. Wow, your story is so cringed. I can't help but smile a lot..I'll for your updated.
Nayeoncee #9
pleaseeeee updateeee
minichocolate #10
Chapter 29: OMG YOU UPDATEDDDD!!! i thought you will never come back to this story, but I'm so happy that you came back TT i loved this chapter, Mark so cute traveling to japan only for Sana and Finally, bamina are togetheeerrrr yaaaasss.
Please, update soon, can't wait ❤