0.8

I'm your 'crush'?? (DISCONTINUE)
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

JESSICA'S POV

"Is he coming with us to?" I'm pointing my finger to Luhan. "Why? I can't have fun withmy friends?","Yeah,you will ruined my mood" the most thing I hate in my life. "I'm still in 1G2B.","Okay,okay.Enough!! Stop it now,let's go." Suho said and grabbed my wrist. They always give the victory to me but not Luhan thats why I hate him.

"There you go,we already have arrive. Have fun okay,princess." Kris give me a warmth smile,its firts time for me seeing his smile and he so handsome.

"Or you want us to be your guide?" Baekhyun start smile widely. Oh God,I might dead if this talktive be my guide. He will go on with all the games here. I shake my head meaning no.

"Come on,I know this would be fun with us" Chen said when he beside me. "Just go" Sehun push me from back. Truly,I'm need an oxygen tank because they going travel this amusement park.

After 3 hours travel,I stopped at bear shop,"You want it dont you?" I smacked Sehun's head. "Yah,why you doing that?","Please dont do it again if you dont want me do it" I chuckled. "Hey,Jessica you want to know something?" I stare at his eyes waiting for the answer.

"Actually....I......I.....urm...I..." WHOA,IS HE STUTTER? This is first time seeing him nervous like saw a scariest ghost ever he met.

"YOU WHAT?!!","I LIKE YOU"he answer in shocked when he heard I'm yell.

Hold up.Oh Sehun, are get fever I know it will be 1 week left for summer. I touched his forehead.

"I'm not s

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
farah_hana
hey,guys wait for update chapter 26...after a long long long long hiatus..

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
JSYStories
#1
Chapter 27: Oh please continue this story
TheICeIsMelting
#2
Chapter 27: please continue i like it so much
BLINKforever #3
Chapter 1: infornt (spelling error,my dear)
locked (p/s: is this really locked or it should be locker?)
assitant (it is supposed to be spell a-s-s-i-s-t-a-n-t)
tweleve (for seriously, tweleve?)

Author-nim, I just read ur story for just a few seconds and I found many errors here and there. Not to say about spelling error, punctuation error, grammar error! Your story has a nice story plot but do make a rewrite okay? Just to recheck your grammar all over again. Sorry if I annoyed you.
BLINKforever #4
Chapter 1: "I knew Luhan always let her dog be free"
Hmmm I'm guessing did Luhan is a girl because you write "her". Better correct ur grammar :)
MikuSuzuki #5
Chapter 14: Too much punctuation error fr me to get hold of da story anymore, srry :( but hey yoyr writing brought me till chap 13
exoshidaelusica7722
#6
Chapter 26: Update ? (个_个)
smurfette #7
Chapter 23: I'll wait for lusica confessing their feeling to each other. I see love between them. :)
myhansoo #8
Chapter 22: I hope its really to be real jessica be luhans girlfriend.
exoshidaelusica7722
#9
Chapter 22: LOLOLOLOL :v
exoshidaelusica7722
#10
Chapter 21: ~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~