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I'm your 'crush'?? (DISCONTINUE)
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JESSICA'S POV.

"Thanks for joining us dinner together,I'm so happy",said Luhan's mom. I just give her smile,Luhan really look like his mother.I bow and about to leave.

"Are you his girlfriend?",I turn face Mrs.Xi. Her face look have mixed feeling sad,happy and curios. I shook my head,make her face look even more sad. Why? Did I do something wrong?

"I wishes that you were his girlfriend because a long time I never saw Luhan smile seem brightly.",she said. Luhan smile bright? I mumbled alone. Is it something happend to her lovely son? I really need to know this. Come on turn to be Sherlock Holmes.

"What happend?",I trying to know.

"Actually,Luhan once bring a girl to homes. Thats when he was grades 1. Her name is Hana,he really loves her but she didn't.",I can feel that Luhan have been a difficult day through many years just like me. Mrs.Xi sigh.

"We had dinner just like you do,jokes and laughing. After the dinner,Luhan tell me that he want to serious in the relationship. So,I tell him that dont put a big trust on relationship. He didn't listen to me at all. Everyday he gave a gift to Hana to proves he loves her but present doesnt mean that you can show your love. He really busy with Football championship,until one day he confess his feeling to Hana. He said to me that Hana didn't accept he because she loves Sehun. More,Luhan give present to attract her but not to show his true feeling through another way. She don't want Luhan leaves her because he so busy with soccer that years.",Luhan's mom told me. I know why he treats me like vampire before because he don't trust any of girls.

"One more thing,he said.....he...he had crush on someone. Did he tell you?",I nodded.

"Yeah,but he didn't tell me her names. That makes me wonder who is the girls?","Yah,quite!!",how dare he treats me like that infront of his mother! I look around and bow.

"I think its already late better Luhan accompany you back",I shook my head. Suddenly,Luhan pull me out from his house. I shock with him,he hold my wris

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hey,guys wait for update chapter 26...after a long long long long hiatus..

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JSYStories
#1
Chapter 27: Oh please continue this story
TheICeIsMelting
#2
Chapter 27: please continue i like it so much
BLINKforever #3
Chapter 1: infornt (spelling error,my dear)
locked (p/s: is this really locked or it should be locker?)
assitant (it is supposed to be spell a-s-s-i-s-t-a-n-t)
tweleve (for seriously, tweleve?)

Author-nim, I just read ur story for just a few seconds and I found many errors here and there. Not to say about spelling error, punctuation error, grammar error! Your story has a nice story plot but do make a rewrite okay? Just to recheck your grammar all over again. Sorry if I annoyed you.
BLINKforever #4
Chapter 1: "I knew Luhan always let her dog be free"
Hmmm I'm guessing did Luhan is a girl because you write "her". Better correct ur grammar :)
MikuSuzuki #5
Chapter 14: Too much punctuation error fr me to get hold of da story anymore, srry :( but hey yoyr writing brought me till chap 13
exoshidaelusica7722
#6
Chapter 26: Update ? (个_个)
smurfette #7
Chapter 23: I'll wait for lusica confessing their feeling to each other. I see love between them. :)
myhansoo #8
Chapter 22: I hope its really to be real jessica be luhans girlfriend.
exoshidaelusica7722
#9
Chapter 22: LOLOLOLOL :v
exoshidaelusica7722
#10
Chapter 21: ~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~