Chapter 1: infornt (spelling error,my dear)
locked (p/s: is this really locked or it should be locker?)
assitant (it is supposed to be spell a-s-s-i-s-t-a-n-t)
tweleve (for seriously, tweleve?)
Author-nim, I just read ur story for just a few seconds and I found many errors here and there. Not to say about spelling error, punctuation error, grammar error! Your story has a nice story plot but do make a rewrite okay? Just to recheck your grammar all over again. Sorry if I annoyed you.
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