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I'm your 'crush'?? (DISCONTINUE)
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When there was end of school time,Jessica had to prepare himself to go work. Jessica work as crew at McDonald,she had been told that she going to become a crew trainee but she reject it because think about her future. He want to be the best archer in the world.

 

NO ONE'S POV

"Hi!! Welcome to McDonald's",thats the way they have to greet each customer enter the restaurant. Jessica gives them a warm smile to welcome them. One customer that eyes on the phone go forward to Jessica counter. He never let his eyes away from the phone.

"Give me one combo Spicy Chicken McDeluxe"Jessica just stared at the boys behaviour.

"Your drinks?"Jessica wait him but no answer were given.She like want to throw the phone's boy into the fryer and cook it.

"Urmm..sir. Could you keep that phone in the pocket?" Jessica let out her angry voice finally.

"You!!!" she really shock that infront of her is Luhan. She feels like a big elephant step on her.

"You always following me,vampires!!" the last sentences Luhan's give make Jessica want to exploded like a volcano.

"I did not following you at all!! Better stay away from me,Lulu. You have to pay me your apologise" Luhan froze when he heard it. Jessica is not like other girls he met before she really doesnt like him at all. Thats make Luhan curious why Jessica really dont like him. He gave the cash to Jessica and get a table.

He look at Jessica while he eating.'what are they talking abo

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farah_hana
hey,guys wait for update chapter 26...after a long long long long hiatus..

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JSYStories
#1
Chapter 27: Oh please continue this story
TheICeIsMelting
#2
Chapter 27: please continue i like it so much
BLINKforever #3
Chapter 1: infornt (spelling error,my dear)
locked (p/s: is this really locked or it should be locker?)
assitant (it is supposed to be spell a-s-s-i-s-t-a-n-t)
tweleve (for seriously, tweleve?)

Author-nim, I just read ur story for just a few seconds and I found many errors here and there. Not to say about spelling error, punctuation error, grammar error! Your story has a nice story plot but do make a rewrite okay? Just to recheck your grammar all over again. Sorry if I annoyed you.
BLINKforever #4
Chapter 1: "I knew Luhan always let her dog be free"
Hmmm I'm guessing did Luhan is a girl because you write "her". Better correct ur grammar :)
MikuSuzuki #5
Chapter 14: Too much punctuation error fr me to get hold of da story anymore, srry :( but hey yoyr writing brought me till chap 13
exoshidaelusica7722
#6
Chapter 26: Update ? (个_个)
smurfette #7
Chapter 23: I'll wait for lusica confessing their feeling to each other. I see love between them. :)
myhansoo #8
Chapter 22: I hope its really to be real jessica be luhans girlfriend.
exoshidaelusica7722
#9
Chapter 22: LOLOLOLOL :v
exoshidaelusica7722
#10
Chapter 21: ~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~