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I'm your 'crush'?? (DISCONTINUE)
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NO ONE'S POV.

"Woof woof","Wait,Chimb. I'm really tired yesterday. I will give you breakfast just wait okay?",she put her little dog beside and take a bath. It was a very bright Saturday mornig,she need to jogg with her dog but she tired to do it. She went downstairs and put her dog's meal. Suddenly her LINE group beeping.

Owl eye : Jessica,you want to us join us? 

Charm girl : Where do you want to go?

Galaxy : We going to beach,you such a dumb girl. Summer is already start!! 

Charm girl : Since when you change your name? I really want to go but dont you think I'm like  tomboy because you all boys?

Dance machine : Don't say like that. You are like our sister.

Leader : Yeah!! Don't worry we will protect you.

Elf's ear : So do you want to join? 

Troll : Pleaseee...

Charm girl : Who is trolll? I want but I dont have transport to go.

Panda : That was Chen hyung.

Eyeliner boy : We going to take you,so prepare...

She quickly grabbed her shirts and short denim. She don't like boy stares at her body it feel like they want to burn her with the stare. There you go, the bell ringing. They really fast like like before and Jessica knew them well. She waved at Chimb and make sure she locked her house.

 

 

JESSICA'S POV.

*At beach*

When they arrived at the beach,all the boy pull out thier shirts and run into the water. I dont want to get inside water!! It will make my hair look like lions. I can't see Luhan here,where is he? I smacked my head. Why you have to care about Luhan? He is not your boyfriend. They love to play game anywhere,in amusement park,school or cafe. What a kid?

"Miss me?",I heard a voice behind me. Luhan...

'Thump','Thump','Thump',this is not the right time to beating. Please ignore it Jessica,he is not your type and you dont want to love again. He smile to me.

"Why don't you joining them? Its look pretty fun there.",he said.

I froze and don't know what to saying. Why I'm being like this? This is was too awkward. "Hey,hey stop shook your head. You might felt dizzy after that",Luhan hold my shoulder.

"Thanks","Do you want to hear about my crush? But

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hey,guys wait for update chapter 26...after a long long long long hiatus..

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JSYStories
#1
Chapter 27: Oh please continue this story
TheICeIsMelting
#2
Chapter 27: please continue i like it so much
BLINKforever #3
Chapter 1: infornt (spelling error,my dear)
locked (p/s: is this really locked or it should be locker?)
assitant (it is supposed to be spell a-s-s-i-s-t-a-n-t)
tweleve (for seriously, tweleve?)

Author-nim, I just read ur story for just a few seconds and I found many errors here and there. Not to say about spelling error, punctuation error, grammar error! Your story has a nice story plot but do make a rewrite okay? Just to recheck your grammar all over again. Sorry if I annoyed you.
BLINKforever #4
Chapter 1: "I knew Luhan always let her dog be free"
Hmmm I'm guessing did Luhan is a girl because you write "her". Better correct ur grammar :)
MikuSuzuki #5
Chapter 14: Too much punctuation error fr me to get hold of da story anymore, srry :( but hey yoyr writing brought me till chap 13
exoshidaelusica7722
#6
Chapter 26: Update ? (个_个)
smurfette #7
Chapter 23: I'll wait for lusica confessing their feeling to each other. I see love between them. :)
myhansoo #8
Chapter 22: I hope its really to be real jessica be luhans girlfriend.
exoshidaelusica7722
#9
Chapter 22: LOLOLOLOL :v
exoshidaelusica7722
#10
Chapter 21: ~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~~T_T~