Title: 10/10

Description/Foreword: 19/20

Plot: 10/10

Language*: 30/30

Originality: 8/10

Flow: 10/10

Characters development:  10/10

FINAL: 97/100

Reviewer's comments:

GALLL, you got a damn high score. ;D lmao.

But seriously though, your threeshot was awesome. <3 

Your title is very rare in asianfanfics and I like how it's straightforward. If you put it in another way, I like how it just directly connects to your plot. ^^

Your description is perfect, you told a part of the first chapter but you didn't quite spill everything out yet. When you told us that Sunny was waiting for Hoya by the gate, it makes readers curious and also makes random questions pop out in their heads like "Why is she waiting for him?". It's a good thing because I myself is curious about that so it makes me interested in your fic right away! However there is one thing that I suggest you should do. That is to not reveal who was waiting for Hoya in the description. Again, it makes the readers curious. Of course you typed out the main characters already which are Sunny and Hoya but if you didn't reveal who was waiting for him, they might have different ideas, they might even get an idea that maybe it was someone else who was waiting. And as they were thinking about that, they will surely be more curious about your fic than when you revealed that Sunny was the one! (:

I like how the plot, especially at the end teaches us a wonderful moral. It benefits most of us and I love reading stories with a moral in it! Like yesterday, when I watched the movie "The Ender's Game" (trust me that movie is awesome.), I learnt a lot from the smart kiddo who played the main character there. And so I ended up using my knowledge and moral I got from that movie into the English essay that my teacher told me to finish by tomorrow. (: Wish me luck for that though! XD So anyway, your fic has a wonderful, beneficial plot which can change people's actions into something way better! 

I can't explain what I feel about your language okay. It's just, English is not your native tongue but you are so good at it my English teacher would want to have like maybe just 2 of you in his English class and that would be enough. (lol.) You have a good use of vocabulary and no problem with your grammar! I didn't check for typos though, because gosh I was too engrossed in your story I didn't even bother to check! XD I also like your paragraphing, it really suits my style! <3 What I like about your language is that you use a descriptive language which I can actually learn from and you didn't mix up your tenses, in my opinion! Good job! ><

Originality, well of course you got that from a quote but you thought about your own plot, like you surely asked yourself, "How am I gonna connect the plot to the quote at the end?" And you did it! The quote was only an inspiration to your amazing end result. (:

The flow is not confusing at all! Just saying because well I usually find fanfics with lots of twists and stuff and honestly, I find it confusing but if the way you put the twist is correct, then there will be no confusion! ^^ (just a short additional information) 

Your character development is fabulous. You didn't reveal the characters' personalities in the description and that is absolutely the right thing to do. Throughout the fic, you told us more about the characters' personalities and I like that about you! ;)

Overall, you wrote an awesome fic and the ending is just so cute! :3 (not gonna reveal it here though) I've also read the comments and they also thought that the ending was cute. XD Also, I personally want a sequel. Okay. Thankies bby <3

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xoxo :*

- hallyuloverxoxo

*Language refers to punctutaion, paragraphing, grammar, etc.