Title: 9/10

Your title is really short yet captivating! If I was browsing through aff and I found this, I would definitely click on it! However, sorry to tell you, there are a lot of stories with this title :( But don't worry, it doesnt affect my interest in this story >< Especially because of your beautiful description :) Your capitalization is perfect too; most of the other stories used a small 's' XD

Description/Foreword: 20/20

Didn't spoil too much about the story and it was written wonderfully! ^^

Plot: 10/10

Honestly, I've never found anything like this before. Although I read a lot of story about a photographer fan and an idol's love story, I've never found one which is so interesting like this >< You also included some dramas in it which made it more fantastic! >< >< ><

Language*: 27/30

Hehehehe, I can't blame you because English isn't your first language so I found some mistakes throughout the story.. BUUUUUT, they were all minor, surprisingly! And for a non-English native speaker, you did veery well on this! :)

Originality: 9/10

Only because of the title hehehe XD I love your story XD

Flow: 10/10

Wonderfully written piece of work with a perfect flow as well. Great job!

Characters development:  10/10

You developed the characters very well! There weren't too many characters, so it doesn't confuses the readers that much. Well done :)

FINAL: 95/100

Reviewer's comment:

Crap, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Definitely recommended to all! ><

-chanteks

*Language refers to punctutaion, paragraphing, grammar, etc.