Title: 7/10

Description/Foreword: 20/20

Plot: 8/10

Language*: 20/30

Originality: 7/10

Flow: 10/10

Characters development:  10/10

FINAL: 82/100

Reviewer's comments:

Starting from the title, it is a very common title but I scored you 7 because it can capture people's attention, curious of the title's answer. However, you should have only capitalized "Do", "Believe" and "Love", which are the important words, instead of capitalizing all of them. So the title will be like "Do you Believe in Love?" Another thing is, you captialized all the letters for "Love" in your title. I understand you probably wanted to emphasize that word since it plays a whole lot of parts in the fic but I think capitalizing the whole word is not necessary. (:

For the description/foreword, it is excellent! In your description, you told the readers about the story in a short way, but it's like you already told them a lot but didn't reveal too much about it! My description about your description must be really confusing in a way and I hope you get it but in case you don't get it, I just want you to know that it's fantastic! It's a good thing you didn't tell the readers a lot about their personalities in your foreword, or you won't get that much for the character development. (:

The plot, even though it's really familiar, was great! Especially the last part, it was really sad like crazy. ): I thought Taecyeon was a hell of a horrible person in your fic and I totally hated him there but then I finally know the truth in the latest chapter. (: 

For language, the score you got isn't because of grammar, which people usually thought it was. In fact, I have not that much problem with your grammar! Your direct speech is one of the problems actually. For example, you typed, "Yes, Sica Unnie?", ask Yoona cutely when she... One mistake I spotted often was your "Unnie" which you always capitalized. (P.S: I usually type or write "eonni" for romanization because the hangul is "언니".)  "Eonni" does not have to be capitalized (well except if that word is in the beginning of the sentence then capitalize it ) because it is just the same as other words. For example, "God" must always be capitalized in any situation because it means that we worship Him. Also, it was supposed to be "asked Yoona". I found these errors often in the other chapters and I hope you don't make this mistake again! (:

Also, you typed, "Whats so important that you have to gather both of us here?", Krystal asked worriedly. Your "Whats" was supposed to be "What's" or "What is". I can understand if it was actually a typo, though. As I told you just now, there are not much mistakes in your grammar. If you end your direct speech with a question mark, you don't have to add a comma after closing your direct speech. So the direct speech would be like this, "What's/What is so important that you have to gather both of us here?" Krystal asked worriedly.

Your pragraphing isn't quite good too, because you used too much direct speech. As a result, you have too much paragraphs and also, you used too much full stop (just the opposite of me since I used like too much commas) which makes your sentences really short. And also, in some direct speeches you didn't tell us who said that specific thing so in order to avoid readers' confusion, I think you should type them. I also suggest that you should lessen your direct speech and use more of description in your fic to make it more interesting. (:

For your originality, the story, according to the foreword is about a maiden who didn't believe that love existed after a heartbreaking past and it is really really common. In other words, I have read stories like these a lot of times but I am very thankful that you didn't copy this from someone else, which I am sure of. (:

I love the flow of your fic, especially the twist about Taecyeon when I thought he was a terrible person lmao. XD Even though there were some grammar errors occuring here and there, I wasn't confused at all. (:

Your character development is awesome! Since you didn't introduce your characters' personalities in your foreword and you developed them throughout your fic which is a good thing like when you described Jessica's character in the first chapter, that when she starts to nag, she won't stop. (: 

Overall, this fic is superb! <3 I just want to know if this fic is completed or not because I want to continue reading it if possible! Or if it is completed, do make a sequel! ^^ Thanks for requesting! xoxo

And here's the link to the story ^^

- hallyuloverxoxo

*Language refers to punctutaion, paragraphing, grammar, etc.