Title: 9/10

From December to December is a nice title, but try to shorten it, next time.

Description/Foreword: 18/20

Your descriptions describes the story clearly and it somehow makes us curious on reading it.

Plot: 10/10

It’s a nice plot, keep it up!

Language*: 30/30

GOOD JOB

Originality: 10/10

Yes! Your story is original! Keep up the good work ^^

Flow: 10/10

I have no comments on this, you’re so good at making the story flow perfectly through the readers’ mind. Nice!

Characters development:  10/10

No comment.

FINAL: 97/100

Comments:

ME LIKE YOUR STORY!