The Date

An American Girl

 

Hoorah for Infinite's comback later this month!  Just saying, today was my birthday and getting to read the comments and hearing the news about Infinte might've made it Very memorable ^^  Thank you once again!

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Jin Hyun pulled out a chair for Helen as they took their seats at a reserved table in a slightly busy restaurant.  There were a few tables being cleared, a few private rooms were available and one large table, to Helen’s left, was reserved.  Jin Hyun blocked her view of the room as he took his seat next to her, also on her left.  He rubbed his hand beneath the table until he heard a click; his gun was locked into place.  Helen smoothed out her dress, making sure her own weapon was secured and covered.

The owner of the restaurant had already given permission for the company and was somewhat informed of what was to take place tonight.  Many people, globally, had heard “tales” and “stories” of the company and what it did; many, in fact, didn’t believe the company even existed but still the name “Madacorp” was a term no one used lightly.  Those that had actually come into contact with Madacorp always felt honored that they had been chosen and were happy to help in any way possible.

Jin Hyun had known Helen since she joined the company, five years ago; they had been paired together almost immediately and were known to have the most completed missions in the entire company.  They were praised and rewarded generously for working so well and being so devoted to the company’s cause, especially at such young ages.  Jin Hyun was 22 and his fancy suit helped give him an edgy, determined, business-like look.  

Hyun smiled at her once they got settled, “I picked it out.”  He spoke proudly while lifting the wine to his mouth. 

“Figures.”  Helen replied.  “You always wanted to see me in girly clothes, didn’t you?”  She teased.

“Maybe...”  Jin Hyun grinned at her mischievously.  Helen laughed, shaking her head and rolling her eyes.  Jin Hyun made sure to always remind Helen that even though she called him “Oppa” that he was definitely not related to her; he did this by throwing cheesy lines at her whenever they met.  A situation like this only helped Jin Hyun prove his point.

“You pushed this concept, didn’t you?”  She accused.  Jin Hyun smirked and took another sip of the wine. 

Before Helen could retort a waiter approached their table.  “Son-nim, I believe your guests are here.”  He bowed and motioned towards the entrance where two men in suits stood.

Jin Hyun nodded and set his glass down as he rose from his seat.  “Park Song will sit in front of you and he is the man to be arrested later this evening – wait for the phone to ring; the other man is my business, so don’t interrupt us.”  He whispered as he pushed in his chair before leaving the table to greet the two men.  Helen sipped at her water, getting ready to play the decoy. 

 

The lights clicked on and Infinite’s apartment filled with life after a long day’s work of schedules.  The boys plopped down on the sofa and on the ground, tired and hungry.  Jungryul was the last to enter; as he closed the door behind him he couldn’t help but look at Helen’s “room”.  He knew that she wasn’t going to suddenly appear from behind that door but deep in his heart he really wished for it.

“Hyung,”  Sunggyu called out; his voice was muffled as he was laying on his belly and his face pressed against the cold, wood floor.  “Food.  Please.”  The other members began to chime in, begging as well. 

“Helen left food for you in the fridge.”  Jungryul motioned his head towards the kitchen.  Sungjong jumped up immediately; he had high expectations, now, for anything Helen cooked.  Hoya and Myungsoo followed close behind while the rest remained in their seats, too exhausted to fight for a meal.  “Don’t eat too much though; we can go get a real meal in a bit, ok?”  Jungryul spoke. 

“Eodie?”  Sungyeol turned his head towards Jungryul.

“Your favourite restaurant.”  Jungryul smiled.  “You all did very well today so I thought I’d treat you to something special.” 

The members began to lift their heads and glance at each other as the excitement rose.  “Bulgogi!!”  They screamed in unison and new energy brought them back to life.  They quickly gathered their things: money and cell phones as Jungryul silently walked into Helen’s room, closing the door behind him.  He sighed knowing no one could hear him.  “Couldn’t you have stayed just a little bit longer?”  he asked the silence. 

Jungryul left the room, leaving the door wide open; he entered the kitchen where Sungjong and Hoya were eating the snacks Helen had made.  Sungjong, looking over Jungryul’s shoulder, was the first to notice something strange.  “Hyung,” he spoke, pushing the goguma into his cheek, “where’s Helen?”

Jungryul ran a hand through his hair, sighing.  Hoya stopped chewing his food and put the container down.  “Hyung?”  Their eyes met. 

“She had…work.”  The rest of Infinite began to gather in the kitchen as Jungryul explained that Helen wouldn’t be coming back.

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kissme-minseok #1
great job!
LemonPop #2
I think it's great!!!! DragonSalt, you're doing awesome!!!
WhosThere13
#3
Also: I'm guessing that you made Hoya get moody because he was frustrated with her simple and not-completely-the-truth answers, right? Just from a writers and readers perspective, that scene may fit in a bit more if you had hinted at his annoyance building up in previous chapters, or at the beginning of this one, say how he was feeling choked or something because his manager was getting stressed and Helen wasn't saying anything and it was beginning to push him too far. It just seems a little out-of-place that you made him fairly mild mannered so far in the story, but sudden made him short tempered and quick to punching random inanimate objects in this chapter. <br />
Again, I'm trying to say this just on a writers level-sorry if I sound pushy-its just a suggestion. :)<br />
Thank you for updating~!<br />
Also: Sorry I meant Jungryul* in my other review for this chapter >>
WhosThere13
#4
Awwww Hoya, don't get violent-getting annoyed and punching walls is never a good response-plus it doesn't make people want to tell you their secrets anymore then before haha<br />
On another note: HOT DAMN HOYA, LOOK AT YOU GO HAHAHAHA XD I loved how Sungjong totally, completely, and unintentionally, ed Hoya. That was just golden. Plus that little 'making-references-to-their-makeout-and-then-giggling-to-themselves' scene with them and Sungjong and Junryul-maaaade me laugh XD It's nice, cus it shows that Helen didn't mind too much from the semi-forced kisses, and Hoya had managed to cool his temper a bit after the makeout. You also just eased the readers from a more serious and passionate scene to a funnier and lighter one without looking too cheesy or unrealistic (in the sense of the story), so good job~ <br />
To address your concern about the Chapter: This chapter didn't click all the way like the previous ones had, but overall it was pretty good-You don't need to change it-it was suppose to be about Helen informing Hoya about her background, and their little love thing going further, right? Then you did just that, as well as added a little bit of other pieces of the story here and there to act as a buffer so the story wouldn't go too off track. It was a little fast, but there's bound to be a couple of chapters in every story that seemed a little sped up, so don't worry. :)
DragonSalt24
#5
^^ i hope you look forward to finding out more about Hyun - hopefully the twist that's coming up will be an interesting surprise<br />
i'm not sure if the place where i found the information but i actally heard that Jungryul is the name of one of Infinite's managers - i wasn't sure if that's actually true but if it was i wanted to use it to make it more realistic^^<br />
i'm glad you actually noticed the different viewpoints! it's hard for me to explain everything without showing an outsider's opinion on a situation so i'm glad you like that and it doesn't bother you or give away too much information^^<br />
thank you again for the comments! i really enjoy your feedback and it's helping me stay on track with the story i wanted to write originally^^! i hope you still enjoy it after this next chapter
WhosThere13
#6
Hmmm I disliked Hyun before, but now I'm kinda wary of him...<br />
It's different to see that one character you created, Jungryul, is kinda acting as a narrator, but when I say different I mean in a good way. It kinda helps the readers since he views the love triangle from his point of view, unbiased, while with Hoya and Helen, its a bit biased since ones POV is emotional, while the other is more analyzing and on-guard with Hyun and a little unsure with Hoya. (Sorry if that sounded confusing haha)<br />
I also like how with Sungjong and Hyun's relationship, you made the former like the latter and be friendly with him, which I can see him doing in real life XD<br />
Anywhos~Thank you for updating, it was another very-well written chapter :)
DragonSalt24
#7
!!! ahh i'm so thankful!! your feedback makes me very happy!<br />
i hope i've made Hoya more realistic towards how he acts on interviews and on shows, etc.<br />
ha i really can't say thank you enough! <br />
if there's something that comes up in the future that you don't quite agree with or don't like in the story please let me know!^^ and ha, i really appreciate your comment! - it helps me know that i'm doing Something right with the story^^<br />
please enjoy!
WhosThere13
#8
Normally I have the bad habit of being a silent reader and not commenting on stories and subscribing and stuff, but I felt guilty when I realized no one had said anything in Chapter 19-and I had loved it!<br />
Hoya is so freakin' awesome in here, and I love your female lead (she's so badass!)I love your writing-It can be really hard to find someone with such good grammar and spelling here on AF, not to mention a female lead with an actual name rather then ~~~ or something, and one so likeable too.<br />
The interaction between them in Chappie 19 is perfect-I admit when I started reading that page, I was wondering if you were going to add a kiss scene-but the amount of skinship was just right-a kiss would have been too fast and would become awkward and a burden later on in the story :)It was perfect!<br />
I just finished reading Chapter 20-Gaaaaaaah I wanna know if Hoya starts a fight with Hyun (though he'd totally lose XD) It's so goooood!<br />
Thank you for updating! Sorry for not commenting sooner!
DragonSalt24
#9
thanks for the nice comments guys!!^^
LemonPop #10
DragonSalt, i'm just giving you a bad time ;) It's really great!