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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 7

First Impression: 9/10
Typography: 9/10
Textures, stock: 9/10
Colors: 14/15
Pictures: 13/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 18/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 92/100

Comments: This is y and mysterious. The photos of the three women are all blended cleanly, though the one at the bottom seems awkward only because it seems to be overlapping the chin of the girl above her. I think it would fit better if the larger girl on the right was faced the other way, that way the center doesn’t look so cluttered. Other than that, it’s very clean. I like the choice of font, the placement could be better but it doesn’t bother me much in the position it’s placed. Overall, nice job.

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First impression [10/10]
Typography [9/10] Love the typography, though the 'God' font seems a bit off, but it's nice
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] The background is nice and I see some textures (?) at the bottom, but they are not blended well, for example one of them is getting in the face of the middle girl in a bad way, you could have worked a bit more on that
Colors [14/15] The colors are perfectly matched, though the effect on the photos makes the red (pinkish whatever) a bit too flashy
Pictures [10/15] I'm not sure if it's from the photos themselves or the effect used on them, but the quality is very grain

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3