Riicchan

'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Bonus Prompt

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 9/10
Textures, stock: 6/10
Colors: 12/15
Pictures: 10/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 14/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 73/100

Comments: It’s cute, I’m not crazy about the photos used, the quality isn’t the best but the male fits the title. I like how it kinda looks like the female is looking at the male so I’ll give you props for the creativity. The font used is really cute and fitting, wish it were a little more dominate. The quote could be bigger but I like how you put the yellow bar behind it, making it pop. Nice job overall.

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First impression [5/10] - My glance immediately lands on the figure of the manny (man bunny xD) which looks really weird.
Typography [9/10] - I actually like the typography in this graphic.
Textures, stocks, etc [5/10] -  None were used, but I'll give you points for the two bunnies next to the title :3
Colors [9/15] - I think the graphic is just a little too white, however the colors used go very well with eachother and I like how they match the picture of the girl.
Pictures [7/15] - The placement is really good, a very nice idea, but the quality of the manny is disastrous. However the picture of the girl is very nicely chosen, used and fitting.
Technique [15/20] - I'm going to ignore the manny and say that everything was put out as a nice idea, there are no unnecessary or floating around stuff, you could have used some more props so it doesn't look so empty, but this way is also fairly good

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3