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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]Type 2, Prompt 11
First Impression: 5/10
Typography: 4/10
Textures, stock: 4/10
Colors: 8/15
Pictures: 9/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 18/20
Total: 58/100
Comments: I’m not quite sure what’s going on in here; I see hands at the bottom, clasped? Or it might not be hands but something else, I’m not sure. It’s not really a good sign when someone has a hard time tying to figure out what’s seen on your poster, I suggest using better quality stock photos. I like the floating figure above, very creepy and it blends nicely with the background, it’s that image at the bottom that’s throwing me off. The font type is fine but the color isn’t. Why? I can’t read it. Black on a dark background will always result in an unreadable title. I get that you wanted a dark theme but if you can’t read the title, which is the focal point, the efforts end up being wasted.
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First impression [8/10]
Typography [7/10] I see you tried to make the typography more interesting but it's a bit unreadable and the fonts don't exactly fit that well with each other, though I think the placement is appropriate
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] The BG is okay, even a bit plain, but the brownish texture placed over everything makes a weird looking effect and is not the best choice
Colors [10/15] The colors are overall nice except for the colorful mashup around the hands, it just look a bit weird
Pictures [15/15] The character's picture is very well placed, cut/blended and has a nice quality
Technique [12/20] I like the overall idea, it's creative, however there are a few details I'd like to mention; first of all shouldn't the hands be open? Thought this does it too it's a bit confusing
Mood/Theme [10/20] The colorfulness on the bottom interferes with the dark mood and like I said the brownish texture is not appropriate here too
Total [69/100]
Type 3, Prompt 5
First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 9/10
Textures, stock: 5/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 10/15
Technique: 9/20
Mood/Theme: 10/20
Total: 60/100
Comments: There are several things wrong with the placement in this poster. You seemed to scatter things about in corners, which is confusing to the eyes. I like your creativity for the splitting of the
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