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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 4, Prompt 2

First Impression: 6/10
Typography: 5/10
Textures, stock: 6/10
Colors: 9/15
Pictures: 9/15
Technique: 9/20
Mood/Theme: 7/20

Total: 42/100

Comments:  Can’t say I understand the theme, if it’s supposed to be happy/ fun-ish? I kinda get that vibe from the photo you used of B2ST since they look a little goofy. I see a faded microphone at the top, which fits in with the title, but you placed the title quite awkwardly over it so it doesn’t stand out as much as it should, at least for me. Plus, the wording in the title itself doesn’t make much sense but I guess it fits, depending on how you view it. The font type doesn’t really tie in with the colors used and it definitely doesn’t match the quote. Overall, this was simple but I’ll give you credit for the clean appearance.

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First impression [7/10]
Typography [6/10] The fonts of the title and the quote are nice, but together they don't match that well and the color of the quote is really inappropriate and shouldn't the title be 'till the last stage' correctly?
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] The plain BG is okay at first glance, but it's a bit too empty; I like how you placed the mic, it's creative though it's a bit unoticeable
Colors [12/15] I already mentioned the quote, also the yellowish light in the BG is a bit too bright
Pictures [13/15] The placement couldn't be better, the quality is okay, the cutting is a bit off at a few spots, but overall it's fine
Technique [11/20] In my opinion it's a bit too simple of a graphic; since you chose the comedy/happy theme you should've added more elements according to that, played with the photo, added a few .png ot other props; it's not that it looks bad like this, but there's not much to grab the attention
Mood/Theme [10/20] Apart from B2ST's goofy faces there's nothing else to show the comedy/fun/happy theme

Total [66/100]

 

 

Type 2, Prompt 4

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 8/10
Textures, stock: 5/10
Colors: 12/15
Pictures: 13/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20

Total: 75/100

Comments:  Another simple poster but this I can tell has the nice fun feel to it. I like it though the picture placement is a little awkward. I would have had both characters in the middle with the font covering their bottom half instead of just the male lead, that way you look at both of them with the title and not just looking at one with the title then shifting over to the right. I liked the colors you used and the pattern for the background was nice. You certainly know how to set theme up so good job on that. Font was okay but you used two different pinks, the light and darker pinks clash and looks confusing, also you have the shade of the heart to compete with but it fits fine. The quote could have b

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3