Story - Flight Of Time

A n a l y s i s

Ti  t  l  e       5 /   5

De s c r  i  p  t  i  on & Fo  r  e w o  r  d     20  /  20
Ap p e a   r   a n c  e       9    /  10
Pl o  t       20  /   20
F l  ow        9   /   10
Wr  i  t  ing    S  t y le     15   / 15
S p  e  l  l  in g   ,    G  r   a  m   m  a  r   ,  P u  n   c  t  u  a   t   i   o  n       19 /  20
O  v  e  r  a l  l     97  /   1 0  0

Title: 5/5

It is great because the readers will know what it means when they read it.

Description&Foreword: 20/20

It was great. It explained thoroughly, and the Foreward was very good. Cause it was exactly what a Foreward is, a preview of the chapters.^^

Appearance: 9/10

The poster is great. But I think it could explain more of what the story is about. Like how art can describe words.

Plot: 20/20

Damn great. I almost cried!

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 19/20
Everything is great. Just some homophones are being miss-used and some-too-many commas. Run on sentences. No-no~