Story Link - Somehow Possible

A n a l y s i s

Ti  t  l  e       4   /   5

De s c r  i  p  t  i  on & Fo  r  e w o  r  d     19  /  20
Ap p e a   r   a n c  e       9/  10
Pl o  t     19/   20
F l  ow        9   /   10
Wr  i  t  ing    S  t y le     14 /     15
S p  e  l  l  in g   ,    G  r   a  m   m  a  r   ,  P u  n   c  t  u  a   t   i   o  n       19/    20
O  v  e  r  a l  l     9 3  /     1 0  0

Title: 4/5
Title is short; it isn't as astounding BUT it is quite catchy ;D
 

Description&Foreword: 19/20
Definitely something a reader would subscribe to, right on the spot! 
 

Appearance: 9/10
The black on the poster is a bit too overwhelming. It made me think it was some kind of Emo-ual story .-. All the words on the poster were readable though ;D
 

Plot: 19/20
This is VERY original ;D There were some boring bits of unnecessary info/ fluff near the beginning, but you immediately made it interesting.

Flow: 9/10
Though you cleared everything up in the end, the beginning was a bit confusing. But you still managed to keep it interesting through out the whole way ;D
 

Writing Style: 14/15
The paragraphs are short & easy to read. The 1st chapter is extremely long though .-. 
 

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 19/20
There were a bit of typos & grammar mistakes here & there, but everything could still be understood easily ;D All punctuations were perfect.