Me Tender
Oh My Gukkie Review GalleryStory Link - Me Tender
Ti t l e 5 / 5
De s c r i p t i on & Fo r e w o r d 1 8 9 / 20
Ap p e a r a n c e 9 / 10
Pl o t 1 6 / 2 0
F l ow 7 / 10
Wr i t ing S t y le 1 5 / 15
S p e l l in g , G r a m m a r , P u n c t u a t i o n 1 6 / 2 0
O v e r a l l 9 1 / 1 0 0
I like the title. I can say I am a fan of it. *evil smirk*
Description&Foreword: 19/20
I deducted one point because I wanted to see some preview at the foreword, that’s all not because your description is not good. I am just being a selfish reader LOL.
I’m not really sure if the poster is intended to be like that. I don’t want to say it’s messy because maybe it’s deliberate. I just have mixed feelings about the poster.
Plot: 16/20
It’s actually my first time reading a PWP. From what I have read, this was supposed to be a oneshot right?(correct if I’m wrong) Anyways, The was awesome! I liked the first chapter, but I suddenly got confused at the second because of the characters.
I don’t know if it’s because I read this 6 am in the morning that I got really confused about it the second chapter. It all gets very confusing.
I really like your writing style personally! :D
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 20/20
Nothing wrong about anything! Hands down:D
Overall: 91/100
Such a new experience/read for me! :D It’s wonderful and hot! I started my morning with your story, and I don’t think it was a bad idea! :D Fighting authornim! :D - Aya
Review by Ayaaachan
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