Memoirs of a Love Story
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Story Link - Memoirs of a Love Story
Ti t l e 5 / 5
De s c r i p t i on & Fo r e w o r d 1 8 / 20
Ap p e a r a n c e 9 / 10
Pl o t 2 0 / 2 0
F l ow 7 / 10
Wr i t ing S t y le 1 5 / 15
S p e l l in g , G r a m m a r , P u n c t u a t i o n 1 6 / 2 0
O v e r a l l 9 0 / 1 0 0
It was interesting and attractive. But I expected more conversations or flashback between Sulli and Kai.
Description&Foreword: 18/20
The description is great.
But it will be great if you describe more about other characters.
I don't have any problems with the poster but I think Krystal's picture that the designer use doesn't suit well for her character. She have a kind and nice girl appearance more like an angel perhaps. The picture gave a dark feelings through it.
Plot: 20/20
It's unfair if I don't give you full marks. It was beautiful and perfect story.
I expect more chapter and more scene actually.
It was great,you make me think that you are a real novel writer.
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 16/20
You have some grammar punctuations mistake. Sometime I can find a few wrong word. You need to fix that. But still it's okay, everybody makes mistake
Overall: 90/100
Congrats :D I really like the story. Do follow my advice, it's okay if you don't want.
Review by -anneramona
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