You're My Bodyguard
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Story Link - You're My Bodyguard
Ti t l e 5 / 5
De s c r i p t i on & Fo r e w o r d 1 8 / 20
Ap p e a r a n c e 5 / 10
Pl o t 2 0 / 2 0
F l ow 1 0 / 10
Wr i t ing S t y le 1 5 / 15
S p e l l in g , G r a m m a r , P u n c t u a t i o n 2 0 / 2 0
O v e r a l l 9 2 / 1 0 0
It was interesting and attractive. No comment for it
Description&Foreword: 18/20
The description is great.
I want to say about the font, I think you need to use Lucida Sans Unicode or Tahoma so it will look more interesting and have that exciting feels to read.
I don't have any problems with the poster but I think you need to use a high quality pictures for your poster :/
Plot: 20/20
I must give this full marks since the plot was great and awesome. I like how Minho personality is, he is sort of bossy, sounds like that.
No comment for it. Becaue it's great. I love it.
It was great but I think you need to use a different and rare words that make the readers feel more excited to read it.
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 15/20
You have some spelling and grammar punctuations. Sometime I can find a few wrong word. You need to fix that. But still it's okay, everybody makes mistake
Overall: 88/100
Congrats :D I really like the story. Do follow my advice, it's okay if you don't want.
Review by -anneramona
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