Chasing Over Seohyun's Love
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Story Link - Chasing Over Seohyun's Love
Ti t l e 5 / 5
De s c r i p t i on & Fo r e w o r d 1 9 / 20
Ap p e a r a n c e 1 0 / 10
Pl o t 1 8 / 2 0
F l ow 8 / 10
Wr i t ing S t y le 1 3 / 15
S p e l l in g , G r a m m a r , P u n c t u a t i o n 1 5 / 20
O v e r a l l 8 8 / 1 0 0
The title is perfect for the plot. Its already enough information for everyone to know what the story will be about.
Description&Foreword: 19/20
The description is brief and accurate. The foreword is decent-length with credits ~
You had a neat poster, background, layout, and even a trailer! Everything was easy to read with the font you chose. The colors weren’t too distracting 
Plot: 18/20
The plot wasn’t exactly original, but its still interesting. I think there should’ve been more diverse personalities in the 3 boys. They all seemed the same, wanting attention from Seohyun.
The story felt too slow. It may have been the length or the delayed plot twists ?
As I mentioned before, it was slow. I’d recommend some more descriptive words ; try to throw in some adjectives in to make your sentences longer
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 15/20
Unfortunately, I’m very picky when it comes to grammar and spelling ; I know your native language isn’t English. Your sentences were confusing at times. I see a repeated mistake in your sentences — you switch tenses in them. For example, “Kyungsoo…you looks frust” (in Ch.2) should be: “Kyungsoo…you look frustrated”. Frust isn’t a word, but frustrated. Another example would be, “How do we gonna start our plan?”. Instead, it should be: “How are we going to start our plan?”
Review by Ramyunnie
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