Pride and Prejudice
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Story Link - Pride and Prejudice
Ti t l e 3 / 5
De s c r i p t i on & Fo r e w o r d 1 9 / 20
Ap p e a r a n c e 8 / 10
Pl o t 1 7 / 2 0
F l ow 1 0 / 10
Wr i t ing S t y le 1 5 / 15
S p e l l in g , G r a m m a r , P u n c t u a t i o n 2 0 / 2 0
O v e r a l l 9 2 / 1 0 0
It obviously isn't very original, because it's a name of a famous novel. But it also attracts others attention, because it's a different take on the same title.
Description&Foreword: 19/20
Wow, it was really interesting and intriguing. I loved it! It also looked very professional, great job! ^_^ One thing I might say, though, is that it seems a bit cliche and also too long. Some readers have a short attention span and may click away after a few sentences, so make it short and impactful, capture the gist of everything in a few paragraphs at most. The disclaimer, author's note, can all come later.
Very professional, however. I hate character charts, what's the point? Giving away all the characters right at the start of the story. This leaves little or no room for characters to develop and grow. Also, I'm not a fan of pictures in the middle of the story, they look awkward and out of place.
Plot: 17/20
It was very cliche, I've read similar stories. You should add a twist, a , etc.
The flow is really just nice, excellent work!
Really great, I love your style, it really engages the reader. ^_^
Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 19/20
There were one or two minor errors, definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. Great job!
Overall: 92/100
Great job! However, maybe you should try not to make it subscribers only? I was a bit irritated that I had to subscribe in order to be able to read it, and some people wouldn't bother, which is a pity, and their loss because this is definitely a great story.
Review by kpopperforever
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