My Mistake {editing}

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Synopsis

I'm your average girl, born and raised in the Philippines, only with my mother by my side. After graduation i was brought here to South, Korea where my dad lives. He isn’t your everyday basketball loving, overprotective and eats a lot dad, he is an egomaniac who cares about his business and as the business world goes there has to be an heir, unfortunately that’s me. My time with him is where my story began.

To protect his heir I had to learn to fight, to survive and lastly I had to have a bodyguard.

Is he an idiot? Yes

Is he proud of himself? Yes

But as stupid as he is I fell for him.

All of that has led to what I’m doing now, running and by the looks of it I can’t run anymore. I want to collapse and give up right here and now but I can't. I need to fight. I need to outrun these idiots chasing me and lastly I need to see him again.

He is the main reason why I'm running, running away from a burning building with 5 idiots chasing me. That house was a trap, and if I keep looking back I can't help but feel that I'm too desperate to see him but right now running is my only option. As I turned left through an alley I saw ramen styled hair. Yes...That's him.

Zel--!

I hear a gunshot before I can finish saying his name. I fell to the ground and the last thing I saw was Zelo running towards tears streaming down his cheeks. He cradled me in his arms and I mustered up the strength the words I can only say to him a dream, I...love..you.

And with that darkness was my surrounding.

 

Foreword

Characters

Major

    Zelo - 16 { international age}

More information coming soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

You/Ria - 15 {International age}

PS. Sorry I can't think of another name

More information coming soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

Minor

 

 

BAP {Best Absolute Perfect}

Zelo's friends

Yongguk{22}, Himchan{22}, Daehyun{19}, Youngjae{18}, Jongup{17}

{International age}

More information coming soon

 

 

 

PS. Don't mind the age...it will clear up in the story anyway and many more minor characters to come.

 

 

Long version of My Mistake (one-shot) 

I always planned on making it longer and after months I finally started writing :)

 

 

My Mistake Posters

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Isn't it pretty by Kazuyashi 

of ♕ derplings ♕ poster shop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

This one is also pretty it is by cherry1900

of violetkecil Poster Shop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This one's great too its by Purple Rabbit

of  ♛ ⓘⓒⓔ ⓒⓡⓔⓐⓜ ⓓⓔⓢⓘⓖⓝⓢ♚.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Another amazing one a GeeBom Art

from  Internal Beauty Poster Shop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Mistake Reviews

 

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❥❥ Review Paradise || Review Shop ❤

 

Thank you for the review since I was able to make this story better.

 

 


 

HI EVERYONE ! :) I'm riacho15. This is my first time writing so please take care of me, I HOPE YOU GUYS WILL ENJOY MY STORY, THANK YOU FOR READING IT AND PLEASE NO SILENT READERS :)

 

And please do NOT plagiarize my story because this is my story and I worked hard on it and if my story is similar to another story then its by coincidence I will never copy someone else's hard work.

 

PS. photo and video credits to their rightful owners 

PPS. I only own the story and the main female character and other OCs

 

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baby16 #1
Chapter 32: Sweetie! I love you and all and you know that but dude freaking update this story and your other fanfics too IT HAS BEEN MONTHS! AND ZELO AND MARIA HAVENT FREAKING MADEOUT YET COME ON!!! AND THEN THERE'S KAI! DUDE!



congrats on your first month in college by the way


BUT FREAKING UPDATE!
rietokki
#2
Chapter 32: Omg i was so happy when I heard that bap is gonna be part of dkfc2 but then i cant go too huhuhu
Roselle22
#3
Chapter 29: author-nim please make more chapters!!!!!XD
Roselle22
#4
Chapter 29: make more chapter such a gggoooooooooooddddddd story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SayHiToMe
#5
Chapter 28: Love the story so far! ^-^
Kpop4Ever2032
#6
Chapter 27: Update soon great story!!!!!
BAPBlackjackVIP
#7
Chapter 26: Yay! Update soon!~~~~~~ ^.^
purplekcs04 #8
Chapter 25: Keep up the good work~! riacho15 :)) <3 Cannot wait for the new chapters to be released
Michu1098
#9
omg thank god i found this fic, i finally found a zelo fanfic so happpy :)))) update soon *thumbs up*
Badass-Kid #10
Chapter 21: Kekekeke, author-nim you're back!
I've been waiting for you~:3
nice fanfic and please update