i can't...

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my first shiee fic ENJOY!

oh if you can... can you please comment? so i know whether im doing good or doing badly... THANK YOU MANY MANY I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT 

i will try my best to update daily... when i have time...

Foreword

its about a girl. who has a brother. and interesting things happen

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Wanshine0221
#1
<3~
Loolyicecream #2
OMG amazinnng
lynne1118 #3
hehe okaay i just got an idea thanks :D
jam_9445 #4
hey..ure story seems nice but a little confusing at times..i tink u shld brin heechul back into e story..it's sad tat he loves her but can't get her and even help her get rid of a love rival by givin himself over..y dun u make him safe her?? he helped her twice alreadi and heechul is like a hero so maybe third time's a charm?..
lynne1118 #5
OKAY ERM... CAN YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT IN THE STORY, SO I CAN WRITE IT TO YOUR LIKING, BECAUSE, I PLANNED OUT MY STORY BUT UNFORTUNATE THINGS HAPPENED AND I LOST THEM ALL T_T sorry for not updating so long i had exams meh meh... BUT TELL ME WHAT YOU MIGHT WANT AND I WILL SEE WHAT I CAN DO THANK YOU MANY MANY
lynne1118 #6
THANK YOU!
HeebumBaengshin
#7
Very interesting~ O.o