Do You Remember? | CarlyNan916
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Title: 7/10
I think I’ve read a few ‘Do you remember?’ stories. Aside of that, the title gave it away, saying that, this story will be about a love story, with either the male or female forgetting about each other due to a extremely busy life or getting amnesia or being a KPOP idol etc.
Foreword: 14/15
Knew it. So Suho is going to be in SM entertainment. But the three bold sentences at the start were lovely. You made them seem short, not very important, but the last one made it great, even though it already was.
Overall Look: 4/5
The poster’s really pretty @-), but I think you should’ve put it in all the chapters there were.
Grammar: 30/30
I’m pretty sure there were no grammar errors, fantastic job ;)
Spelling: 20/20
Nope, I saw none. :)
Flow: 15/15
Oh, I like how you wrote how old they were in the chapter titles, to make sure that no one is like ‘Huh? How old are they now?’ or something along those lines~ Also, there was no choppiness in the chapters. And they were so cute >.<
Originality: 3/5
Sometimes there’s ‘Do you remember?’ stories, but I’ve got to say, I loved this one.
Total: 93/100
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Reviewed by: b2utyful_angel
(a note from her: I noticed that when there was a full stop, you would leave a big space e.g : Boys? I thought there was going to be a girl. Oh, I think I’ll subscribe to your sequel. I really liked this fanfic. Author-nim, hwaiting!)
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