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Title: 4/5

‘Lost In Fairytale’ made me think that most likely it will be a fantasy fic. But I got proved wrong, so good job on hiding what really is the story about.

Foreword: 15/15

Wow. Just wow. It was an excellent foreword full stop.

Overall Look: 4/5

It’s quite nice, although I think that you should’ve requested a poster from somewhere. It’s interesting how you can choose whatever story you want (I used to have a thing like this).

​Grammar: 24/30

In Chapter 4, Listen to my heart, there is this grammatical error, ‘As me and my brother…’ should be ‘My brother and I’. Also in Chap 5, the one with Sungyeol in it, has this certain part, ‘…you scooted closer and rest your head on his broad shoulders.’ Should be rested and shoulder with no ‘s’ or then it will mean you’re leaning on…top of him. Awkward much? There weren’t many mistakes that pissed me to the core.

Spelling: 20/20

 I think there were no spelling errors.

​Flow: 13/15

It flowed in an alright way, but sometimes there were choppy, rushed parts.

​Originality: 4/5 

It is original, I must say, there aren’t so many cliché, boring parts.

Total: 84/100

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Reviewed by: b2utyful_angel

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