Neighbourhood Idiots by TuesdayD

Title (3/5)

The title is creative and interesting, but it is improper. The correct way to write is: “Neighborhood Idiots” instead of “Neighbourhood idiots.” The word ‘neighbourhood’ is incorrect spelling.

Appearance (4/5)

I like the poster, it looks like it well matches with the storyline and it’s also great that you showed the characters in the story. But, it would be better if you add some significance in the poster, like show the love lines/couples or even a neighborhood.

Description/Foreword (8/15)

The description does not really tell much and it seems like an angst story, not a fun and happy mood like how the poster gives off. So the description is a bit confusing. It is good that you gave an excerpt in the foreword, but it is a little too lengthy and can cut readers off and not want to read more. Plus, it would help readers if you add a character profile to show readers characters’ traits and personalities.

Plot (9/25)

The story does only have one chapter, but just from that one chapter I cannot really set the plot for the story. In my opinion, I think it is best to give some hints and clues for readers to foreshadow what will happen in the future of the story. But, I think it is good that you introd