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Stupid South Korean by doramaaprncss

Title (0/5)

The title isn’t very eye-catching and wouldn’t really make me want to click on your story. Also, even if your description says that you’re not against South Koreans, my first impression of your title was that you ARE against South Koreans.

 

Appearance (3/5)

The poster gives off a sad, dark mood that matches with your story. Great! It would also be best to have a background.

 

Description/Foreword (9/15)

First of all, move the disclaimer and your character cast down to your foreword. Keep the summary, but take out the word, “summary.” The summary is great though, it makes me want to read your story. Plus, try to add more about the personalities/hobbies and how the characters are like. Move the review credits down to the foreword, too. The little excerpt from your story in the foreword is perfect where it is. 

 

Plot (12/25)

The plot is cliché in its own way. The way how it’s a North Korean female is against the South Korean male is the same way as the female lead hates the male lead. But, I can see how your originality comes into play, so kudo

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500sunny500
#1
@reeseee3: Sorry! We're closed! >.< However, we made a new request shop right here:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/231323
The forms are the same, so you can just copy and paste! :D
500sunny500
#2
@scarlettwolf: I think I understand what you mean. However, in our current generation, we use single spaces instead of double spaces. Double spaces were used a long time ago because it was harder to tell if the punctuations were single spaced. Nowadays, we can easily tell the spaces because each key on your keyboard uses up to same. I'm not sure if I got your point, but here's the link where I got all this information: http://desktoppub.about.com/cs/typespacing/a/onetwospaces.htm
scarlettwolf
#3
It appears to be AFF... =/ (at least in the comments)
Well anyways, as long as you know about it(like how to double space), I'm fine with it.
scarlettwolf
#4
hmm...
Well, I think it's AFF. It looks like there is only one space when there are really two...
It's in every chapter I think too. But it seems it's AFF...
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
500sunny500
#5
@scarlettwolf: We're not exactly sure what you're talking about. ^^;; Would you please mind pointing out the chapter we made our mistake on?
scarlettwolf
#6
AYO! ^^
Not really gonna say too much, and I have no idea if this is just AFF being weird, but after a period, exclamation mark, etc. you need to have double spacing. Like right there.
Maybe it's just AFF formatting, I couldn't really tell... ._.
ShanghaiTiger
#7
I'll credit you tomorrow, okay?
ShanghaiTiger
#8
thanks :)