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★ Silly Dreams Request Shop ◕ ◡ ◕Stupid South Korean by doramaaprncss
Title (0/5)
The title isn’t very eye-catching and wouldn’t really make me want to click on your story. Also, even if your description says that you’re not against South Koreans, my first impression of your title was that you ARE against South Koreans.
Appearance (3/5)
The poster gives off a sad, dark mood that matches with your story. Great! It would also be best to have a background.
Description/Foreword (9/15)
First of all, move the disclaimer and your character cast down to your foreword. Keep the summary, but take out the word, “summary.” The summary is great though, it makes me want to read your story. Plus, try to add more about the personalities/hobbies and how the characters are like. Move the review credits down to the foreword, too. The little excerpt from your story in the foreword is perfect where it is.
Plot (12/25)
The plot is cliché in its own way. The way how it’s a North Korean female is against the South Korean male is the same way as the female lead hates the male lead. But, I can see how your originality comes into play, so kudo
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