{review} Calling hobear4ever
★ Silly Dreams Request Shop ◕ ◡ ◕Being Forced to Marry Him by hobear4ever
Title (2/5)
The title is quite common and bland. I've seen this title tons of times, and since it's cliché, it doesn't catch my attention. Plus, you don't add a period at the end of the title.
Appearance (5/5)
Your appearance is really eye-catching. From the look of the poster, I would immediately continue and read this fanfic. It matches perfectly with the story, and has the perfect "fun"-like theme.
Description/Foreword (7/15)
Your description told me a small summary of the story, which is good. Your foreword also told me about the characters, which is also a good start. However, there were grammar errors and more author notes.
Plot (7/25)
I've seen these kind of plots all of time, so I docked off a lot of points for the lack of creativity and the common plot. What surprised me, though, was how Woohyun unexpectedly kidnapped 'you', even though you two love each other.
Characters (7/15)
I've seen these type of characters, so I can possibly predict how these characters are going to end up and what their personalities will be. 'You' are a normal girl who is forced to get married with a son whose dad has a huge company. Myungsoo plays the part of the son who will take over the company later in the future. I can predict that in the end, these two will somehow fall in love and poof! The e
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