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Being Forced to Marry Him by hobear4ever

Title (2/5)

The title is quite common and bland. I've seen this title tons of times, and since it's cliché, it doesn't catch my attention. Plus, you don't add a period at the end of the title. 

 

Appearance (5/5)

Your appearance is really eye-catching. From the look of the poster, I would immediately continue and read this fanfic. It matches perfectly with the story, and has the perfect "fun"-like theme.

 

Description/Foreword (7/15)

Your description told me a small summary of the story, which is good. Your foreword also told me about the characters, which is also a good start. However, there were grammar errors and more author notes. 

 

Plot (7/25)

I've seen these kind of plots all of time, so I docked off a lot of points for the lack of creativity and the common plot. What surprised me, though, was how Woohyun unexpectedly kidnapped 'you', even though you two love each other.

 

Characters (7/15)

I've seen these type of characters, so I can possibly predict how these characters are going to end up and what their personalities will be. 'You' are a normal girl who is forced to get married with a son whose dad has a huge company. Myungsoo plays the part of the son who will take over the company later in the future. I can predict that in the end, these two will somehow fall in love and poof! The e

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500sunny500
#1
@reeseee3: Sorry! We're closed! >.< However, we made a new request shop right here:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/231323
The forms are the same, so you can just copy and paste! :D
500sunny500
#2
@scarlettwolf: I think I understand what you mean. However, in our current generation, we use single spaces instead of double spaces. Double spaces were used a long time ago because it was harder to tell if the punctuations were single spaced. Nowadays, we can easily tell the spaces because each key on your keyboard uses up to same. I'm not sure if I got your point, but here's the link where I got all this information: http://desktoppub.about.com/cs/typespacing/a/onetwospaces.htm
scarlettwolf
#3
It appears to be AFF... =/ (at least in the comments)
Well anyways, as long as you know about it(like how to double space), I'm fine with it.
scarlettwolf
#4
hmm...
Well, I think it's AFF. It looks like there is only one space when there are really two...
It's in every chapter I think too. But it seems it's AFF...
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
500sunny500
#5
@scarlettwolf: We're not exactly sure what you're talking about. ^^;; Would you please mind pointing out the chapter we made our mistake on?
scarlettwolf
#6
AYO! ^^
Not really gonna say too much, and I have no idea if this is just AFF being weird, but after a period, exclamation mark, etc. you need to have double spacing. Like right there.
Maybe it's just AFF formatting, I couldn't really tell... ._.
ShanghaiTiger
#7
I'll credit you tomorrow, okay?
ShanghaiTiger
#8
thanks :)